Our story began on the frozen tundra, where barbarians roamed over thousands of years after the first landing of Bok. They were hearty warriors that valued strength and honor above anything else. Rolf the rat boy was the adopted son of Chieftain Kram of the Wolverine Tribe, although the latter claimed that the boy was merely his spoil from a war with the devious rat-men, Stakors. Being bullied and looked down upon by the tribe, Rolf was determined to claim his honor as a true barbarian, but little did he know that the immortal gods had an entirely different plan for him.
Meanwhile, storm clouds are gathering inside the walled city of Ubbin Falls at the edge of the Tundra…
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You have a good story going on here. Keep pushing ahead to make it better and its well written. I read more Romance novels and stories but I like yours so far. Rolf sounds like an interesting character.
While the author has designed a clear world for our character, as of writing this, the latest update was 22 days ago. I for one, would love to see more of this. Rolf is a smart kid with dumb ideas, your typical teenaged protagonist, but at least he tries to defy his situation instead of accepting it. Now the author has used some very nice descriptions in their story, but could use a little bit of polish or reread what they wrote. Sometimes the wrong words are used or a phrase is input improperly. Not that it detracts from the story overall if you understand what you're reading. It just funny little quips like that that make me look forward to the next chapter. Overall its pretty decent and I hope the author continues making more even though they are busy translating other novels such as Tempest of the Battlefield. Good luck to you, Author-san.