it get my attencion now...keep it up n if the story continue be interesting even it need spirit stone i dont care....for the starter dont mind other people n keep it up
7 years ago
5
Immortal_Potato
This book deserves more attention.
POTATO
POTATO
POTATO
POTATO
POTATO
POTATO
POTATO
POTATO
POTATO
POTATO
POTATO
POTATO
POTATO
POTATO
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7 years ago
4
Immortal_Kaizer
Good start... Like ur story... Work hard author gambate..... Cayok2.... All the best........... .............................. ........................... ........................ .............................. ............................ .......................
7 years ago
3
Daoist654204
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6 years ago
2
Daoist654204
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6 years ago
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aljarafito
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6 years ago
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LeYank
Exelente historia, me atrapó.
Hasta ahora me ha gustado mucho, quiero más capítulos para ver cómo se desarrolla, además de algunos errores gramaticales en algunos capítulos, está muy buena.
6 years ago
1
Mabc1487
Por el momento me ha gustado la historia, se ve con mucho potencia; el desarrollo del personaje principal es algo lento y tengo dudas hacia donde irá dirigido.
6 years ago
1
ThePumpkinKing
The world background is not so bad, but everything is going to fast. The mc became extremely powerful in like 15 chap. he is not op like in other novel but development is way to fast for me. But this is not the worst... i’m not realy good at english (i m french), but the writing quality is crap even i can see how terrible it is and i can’t take it anymore (there is more than one mistacke every sentence...). So yeah this novel need editing and it will be ok, or at least passable.
7 years ago
1
revolverheld
Decent story but in desperate need of an editor I have been trying to enjoy it but the broken English and flip flopping of pronouns make it hard for the story to flow.
7 years ago
1
H_Onee
U got my attention...
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Potato
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Potato
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Potato
Potatoes
Knife
Chopping
Frying
Potatoes chip
Eat
Reading
7 years ago
1
JPrats_2512
muy buena historia me gusta ojalá continuará deseo ver como se desarrolla y no dejarlo a mi imaginación.....................................
it get my attencion now...keep it up n if the story continue be interesting even it need spirit stone i dont care....for the starter dont mind other people n keep it up
This book deserves more attention. POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO
Good start... Like ur story... Work hard author gambate..... Cayok2.... All the best........... .............................. ........................... ........................ .............................. ............................ .......................
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Exelente historia, me atrapó. Hasta ahora me ha gustado mucho, quiero más capítulos para ver cómo se desarrolla, además de algunos errores gramaticales en algunos capítulos, está muy buena.
Por el momento me ha gustado la historia, se ve con mucho potencia; el desarrollo del personaje principal es algo lento y tengo dudas hacia donde irá dirigido.
The world background is not so bad, but everything is going to fast. The mc became extremely powerful in like 15 chap. he is not op like in other novel but development is way to fast for me. But this is not the worst... i’m not realy good at english (i m french), but the writing quality is crap even i can see how terrible it is and i can’t take it anymore (there is more than one mistacke every sentence...). So yeah this novel need editing and it will be ok, or at least passable.
Decent story but in desperate need of an editor I have been trying to enjoy it but the broken English and flip flopping of pronouns make it hard for the story to flow.
U got my attention... Update more More More More More More Potato And Potato More Potato Potatoes Knife Chopping Frying Potatoes chip Eat Reading
muy buena historia me gusta ojalá continuará deseo ver como se desarrolla y no dejarlo a mi imaginación.....................................
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