The Great Exotic Food Critique

A shameless full star review.... BITE ME!!! P.S. there is no transmigration in the novel and I will try to stray away from the cliches and one thing I can say is that there will be no harem... hell there may not even be an ounce of romance in this novel. I am trying something guided towards mature audience and will mostly focused on MC. MC is human not an omnipotent being that knows everything and is actually a bit of noob. I am trying hard so that he grows as a character and you see his growth. He is also not that intelligent(as seen from his job) but will attain experience as he goes on his journey to search for the most exotic food in the universe, this is his curiosity, this is his goal in life, this is the path he follows.

Such a long prologue. 7 chapters and there's barely any hint about the main story. There's really no good point to this so far. There are some minor spelling issues. The pacing is too slow for it to be immersive. The cover is also not that appropriate, it doesn't align with the story nor main character. I never enjoyed Bear Grylls show, so this is pretty meh.

Another shameless review!! Well what do you expect.. hmph! I am TabooGod Well back to the review- The auxiliary volume(or the origin of MC and some of the characters) is over. And we can now begin with the main story and I want to say that adding the food hunting part with an emerging supernatural sifi world is hard.... and conjuring up a somewhat interesting story-line based around those theme is harder. May god bless this novel(looks at my name again...) I bless this novel!! Though there is not a huge of reader base, I will keep this story alive and not abandon it like my other novels(not gonna lie... I have abandoned multiple novels before on royalroad.. )

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