Long time ago, there is actually do have magic existed. However, after the a civilization "The Ending of Wisdom", Magic is only left a name in the corner of historical books.
So, is it actually gone?
I mean, the magic, is it real gone?
It's great but there is room for improvement. Please check your grammar, if you don't know how to edit. Then please use grammarly.com................ .... .... ...
A slow Start, but a wide potential for the Story Development. And ... Please, Check your Grammar - it‘s horrible. Good luck and have fun.
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A good story with character's backgrounds interesting. The start is slow but de can feel the emotions and can understand the hero. I can't really said that the story is good because there are not many chapter but I liked the start and wait with pleasure new chapter.