Reincarnate as Ultron in a Cultivation World

The story isn’t bad but man that synopsis really makes things seem werid lol. Honestly some of these original novels that are coming out are as whacked as heck.

Hi so aside from your horrible grammar, this seems like a pretty good original novel you've come up with. Why don't you try to get a editor to help you with the grammar? If you don't know where to get one then just try using Microsoft word or something to fix it for you.

Hoop Author here date 5/1/18 and I be out a while readers since I have to get ready for my exams but.....I recommended you to read one of the novels that is similar to mine but not created by me it called robot upgrade something....

The grammar is so bad it cracked me up, but as a fellow author (on a different account), I must give you a 10/10 for courage. Your ideas are good but you should get an editor to fix your grammar and help structure your chapters more. Hope this helps!

It was a nice idea using ultron in a cultivation world. But it look weird the way the system work, it should be something like "i was reincarnated in another wolrd just to be made a slave/host of ultron? lol"

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my friend, allow me to be blunt; as you admit, your grammar is certainly terrible, with overuse of slang and lack of proper spacing makes it difficult to read as it appears as one long rant. as far as world building is concerned, sparce would be putting it lightly, with one prodominant issue i find that, to be fair, isn't a problem with you alone, and that is the lack of explanation regarding cultivation; i keep seeing so many different things in such stories that i feel like they're being made up as one goes along. however, i must admit that i do want to see where this story goes, or perhaps where it could POSSIBLY go, but first it needs cleanup, and lots of it; i'm not the only one struggling with this, and that's a right shame given that you strike me as a real creative fellow. sort yourself out. maybe ask for help in translation. and i'm sure you'll go far.

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So 4-5 chapters a week, it's been 3-4 months O_O ok don't make a book if you not gonna finish it cause peeps cant just not read something they started.

i think the writer purposely do the grammatic error base on the chapter i read. well. im gonna read it more...good luck for your exam..hope you're not screwing up written exam by purposely do grammatical error on your paper.

This novel has so much potential, because who wouldn't want to be Ultron. A badass robot that can create thousands of himself. This could be like a Army Building novel where Ultron makes Ultron Sentries like in the movie. The grammar was so horrible that I could die. And it looks like the author won't fix the grammar and he is starting a new novel so maybe someone could start this novel over and make it better.

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