Ok i thought it would be dumb but its actually pretty interesting just the first chapter! Cant wait for story to progress and im not a paid reviewer or anything if you check my reviews you will see im actually a picky reader with a wide range of genre. And i actually find this one to be interesting!
7 years ago
3
Treedust
hello i am a biased writer and sorry for the long releases ill do more chapters when exams end for me______________________________________________________
7 years ago
2
Slife_Tempest
The story is Okay,,,When is the next chapter?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
3 years ago
0
Silver_Moon789
The story is...ok, but it's also really rushed and the lack of proper grammar kind of hurts my brain a little bit, the character is kind of meh and so is the world, though mostly it's the messy writing that really annoys me, does the author not know how to properly punctuate? If English isn't your first language than I can understand that but if that's the case shouldn't you get a beta reader or something? Also, the story is really rushed, and the MC is kind of all over the place, I'll drop it for now but I'll check on it every once in a while to see if it gets better
7 years ago
0
Nofri
This novel is good and interesting, many element in this novel that make this novel good.
The downside of this novel is the release of this novel is to long.
I hope this novel can make a fast release like 7 chapter a week or more and im sure this novel will become hot.
I ur loyal reader hope u can continue this novel an make this good novel famous and make a faster release and im sure many people will read this novel.
7 years ago
0
Treedust
From now on i'm writing the novel slower because i've seen my quality of my work it sucks balls.................................!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok i thought it would be dumb but its actually pretty interesting just the first chapter! Cant wait for story to progress and im not a paid reviewer or anything if you check my reviews you will see im actually a picky reader with a wide range of genre. And i actually find this one to be interesting!
hello i am a biased writer and sorry for the long releases ill do more chapters when exams end for me______________________________________________________
The story is Okay,,,When is the next chapter?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story is...ok, but it's also really rushed and the lack of proper grammar kind of hurts my brain a little bit, the character is kind of meh and so is the world, though mostly it's the messy writing that really annoys me, does the author not know how to properly punctuate? If English isn't your first language than I can understand that but if that's the case shouldn't you get a beta reader or something? Also, the story is really rushed, and the MC is kind of all over the place, I'll drop it for now but I'll check on it every once in a while to see if it gets better
This novel is good and interesting, many element in this novel that make this novel good. The downside of this novel is the release of this novel is to long. I hope this novel can make a fast release like 7 chapter a week or more and im sure this novel will become hot. I ur loyal reader hope u can continue this novel an make this good novel famous and make a faster release and im sure many people will read this novel.
From now on i'm writing the novel slower because i've seen my quality of my work it sucks balls.................................!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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