Bridge of Solitude
Margaret Laurence is a smart and witty girl with a sharp tongue, cheerful personality and stubborn attitude. She is kind, friendly and is not afraid of getting into troubles or creating them. She doesn’t back down from a challenge and never lost a fight, regardless if it’s verbal, mental or physical.
But that was all in the past. Somewhere along the line, she lost that spark in her and became a regular average girl. She convinced herself to stay quiet, move on with her life and not bother about unnecessary things. That’s the Margaret Laurence of Golden Dawn University today.
An unexpected friendship with the silent, sleepy and the infamous, Arthur Bridge added bit of color to her otherwise mundane life. But just when things seem to fall in place, Arthur is falsely accused, and Margaret is forced to confront many things she chose to ignore. But she didn’t wish to sit aside anymore. She is intent on proving Arthur’s innocence, even if it meant going against the whole university.
As the spark inside her is once again reignited, Margaret is not afraid of stirring up a whole lot of troubles and pissing off many more people who are not to be messed with.
Read on as Margaret teaches harsh lessons to students and teachers alike; while using her brilliance to outsmart her opponents, play mind games with the biggest masterminds and scheme against the sly old foxed.
Old conspiracies are solved and hidden plots are exposed.
And all the while she helps create seven mysteries of the university along with a few bored old men.
Follow Margaret’s adventures as she shakes the century old university to its foundations with all sorts of disturbances.
Hi there! I would like to give my kudos to you 😭 ive been looking for originals who have this kind of narration style man! Deymm, totally reminds of my classmate's narration style... Love you 😆 Okay. To be honest, there are still some super minor grammatical errors in some sentences (but looove ur style)... I have that feeling you will gradually improve 👌 story developement is quite fast but u can just modify it a bit and yo chaps is short 😭😭😭😭 keep up the good work!!!!
*Remember: this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: The only criticism I can muster is that the character building feels too slow to me and that the MC is the only one notably built upon within the first five chapters. I personally would suggest building up others as well within those chapters, but you do what you feel works best for your book.;,;. Positive Feedback: I feel that all in all this is a good book, I may not be interested in the content thereof, but I feel that it is well written with no notable errors. Keep up the good work.;,;. Personal Feedback: I did read the first 5 chapters due to promising that every novel I added to my library for any reason I'd do at least that with, however, I will be removing it after typing this review due to the fact that it is just not my cup of tea, albeit well written.;,;. Don't let this stop you though, keep writing for your fans.;,;.
The story itself is good, didn't expect this from a school setting. Pretty good read, my only issue is wow your chapters a long, like its awesome cause most writers on this site write like 2 words and leave it at that. But it is also overwhelming to read. Like it felt like 2-3 chapters in one, making it hard to continue cause the next chapters were sometimes even longer would recommend doing long then short chapter. Cause 1st chapter loved it wanted to binge read through it before going sleep but the sheer length of your chapters made it impossible.
You have better writing style than me that's for sure hahaha... pretty descriptive keep it up! one day your novel will be recognize... probably when there's more chapters :) I do hope it really get recognize since it is clear that everything is well thought of unlike other novels that you have to turn off your reasoning to read. Thank you so much for sharing your work! I'll be cheering you on! good luck and God bless you need it your genre is hard to thrive in since the readers in this site likes action stuff but I'm really hoping the best for you =)
Wow I was quite surprised by your book, the narration style and writing is like that of a professional author. A few mistakes in grammar but the story is intriguing and captivates you. Normally don't read books of this style, but you aced this its a great mixture of action and mystery. The chapters are long though but you manage to pull it off pulling the reader back in to continue reading at the just the right time. Just banged this into the library so keep up the good work. Looking forward to her counter attack :)
Good start! The novel is great and I like the way of story telling of the author (that's what I lack). Each chapter is long enough for readers to enjoy but I will advise that the chapters must be cutted(for me only) keep it up and surely, this will stand out.
I don’t like romance. Actually I loathe romance, all these good novels wasted on romance. I wonder what would have happened if they didn’t get the protagonist curse from the author. Anyway I’m not one to judge and I like the discord Satan letter.