The Theory of Accelerated Evolution
Author: SirJoshOfSocks
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The world has changed. Humans are stilled at adapting to there environments. They create cloths, weapons, buildings that allow them to adapt to a changing environment quicker than any other living things on earth. What if Evolution was accelerated for all living things on earth. No longer is it required to wait generation for major changes to happen to genetic structure, but it happens instantaneously. Could human's adaptation keep up, or would they have to embrace this new world by taping into their own genetics and evolve themselves.
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realy good idea :) an evo. for all races ı waiting for more chapter for a more good review keep it up realy good idea :) an evo. for all races ı waiting for more chapter for a more good review keep it up
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An interesting concept for a novel. The writing quality is extremely high and the story development is solid. The character design is good and the world background can be fleshed out at a later date. However, there is one major, major problem. Paragraphing. The paragraphs are far too large and the average reader would be put off by it, instead, they would likely just skim over it, missing information that may be crucial to the story, leaving them confused if you reference said information in the future. I'm not saying that you should re-write all the paragraphs, just change some of them to the degree that they make sense when they are split apart. But if this is your first attempt at writing a novel, good job! You have a real talent at it. Keep up the good work.