Cleaning Up The Future

Cleaning Up The Future

Sci-fi14 Chapters332.5K Views
Author: 23DN4L
4.75
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First three chapters of Book 1 free.

Edited BOOK 1 available for sale:



drednal.com/buy



Price too steep? Well, I want to thank you all for your support, so look out for my free copies of book 1 at the end of special Book 2 chapters.



Being transported 16 years into a dystopian future wasn’t included in the job description for the janitorial staff at ExplorerTech Industries, but that’s exactly what’s happened to Sia.



Her objective? Escape the country.



Priorities:



Outmaneuver animals with various mutations

Learn to control the unusual device that’s lodged inside of her head

Processing chances of survival:…..Error……



“I’m doomed.”



A Science Fantasy novel that takes the reader along on a rocky adventure through New Cinalia, where traveling alone always leads to disaster.



Public Perception is the first book in the Cleaning Up The Future Series.



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Sayl
Sayl

I started reading this novel as an exchange in reviews. I'm certainly glad I took the time, the story is interesting even if the amount of chapters leaves me wanting more. The quality and english used is of superb calibre and I must applaud both the writer and his editor for that. The characters show a good build-up in character although there is a lack of depth, yet this is mostly due to the lack of current chapters. The world building is interesting and leaves one wondering what the future will hold for this fic. I will update this review sometime in the future when There are more chapters for me to feast my eyes on. For now I would advise people to read the fiction, It is worth your time!

7 years ago
5
DeJeL
DeJeL

*Remember: this review is based on the first five chapters.* Constructive Criticism: I'd suggest that with your constant scene changes you make sure that when the focus character changes, that you state who the focus character is... I got a little confused with the only thing to go on being the time the events were taking place.;,;. Positive Feedback: You seem like some sort of professional writer with the quality of the plot, character build, and background. Also, your grammar and structure are well done.;,;. Personal Feedback: I did as promised and read this novel to review it. I'm sorry but the story holds no interest to me so I'm discontinuing it here... Keep up the effort and satisfy the fans you have the best you can.;,;.

6 years ago
3
Psechi
Psechi

Absolutely worth reading! Fun mix of plot concepts... contemplative but not deep. Then action! The one thing that missing sometimes is scene background and description. Hard to follow or visualize the scene. But who cares when we get such fun characters! Sia will slowly win you over, though she's an airhead at times. And I can't wait to see Ika in action again. Give this one a try.

6 years ago
1
Bigwall1296
Bigwall1296

Starting reading as a review swap but I must say this is a very good story. The characters interaction and sudden and swift transition between main characters is very well done. I can't wait to keep reading I thoroughly enjoy this quirky story. One of my new faves!!

6 years ago
1
Darkon
Darkon

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6 years ago
1
LexieJane
LexieJane

The writing quality is smooth and engaging, it's a very good read! The author updates enough to keep things moving, and the story's development is perfectly paced and sensical. Character design...I want to see more and more of Sia, I hope there's a lot a lot of chapters to come. Sia is like an accidental but still somehow kickbutt hero. It's an interesting way to have a character, and the author pulls it off flawlessly. I'd give Character Design 10 stars if I could. World Background is good too, I gave it 4 out of 5 because I know there's still more development to be done. It's a really good read overall, if you're looking for a story like suede, this is the one.

6 years ago
1
Nolan365
Nolan365

Its a captivating story. As the story progresses it has not become dull. Can't wait for nire chapters, 6 is not enough. Characters seem strong overall. Sia has a lot of potential. Environment has potential to be creepy. Giant insects, yea we have a problem.

7 years ago
1
ElleKay
ElleKay

The writing style here is really creative and unique, while the story has a nice tempo to it-- all in the present tense. So it feels like you're right in the moment with the characters. It's really refreshing. I think the story and character development needs some work, but it's really pulling together with the more chapters that come out. Good world building too! Also, the author seems to be putting out a lot of chapters in a short span of time, so looking forward to making this one of my usuals!

7 years ago
1
JonesGreen
JonesGreen

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7 years ago
1
KingoftheWorld
KingoftheWorld

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7 years ago
1
yuhyeenie
yuhyeenie

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7 years ago
1
LittleSoftPaws
LittleSoftPaws

Surprisingly ****** but deep cover picture and title... You have my stars.... Wont read till it has 30 chap since i has seen many originals dropped before that mark... So keep up da good work! .. .. .. 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words.... Qidian!!! Clean up your review system!!!!! Why must I YOUR GRANDMOTHER write a 140 words just to review? What is this school essay??!

7 years ago
1
soulla
soulla

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

4 years ago
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