The Last Human Reincarnates

I honestly only decided to give it a try because I was bored. It was not that bad. He has good grammar and he understands perfectly, even the dialogues. The bad thing is the interest, I lost the interest to continue reading. The idea is definitely good but the way it was executed can be improved, in my opinion. The cultivation became unnecessarily complex as a concept, sometimes "More" is not always better. The system topic is fun, but I don't see any use for it here. Another negative point is the "advance" of the story according to the chapters. Every thing creeps too much, I don't mean to offend but I'm not a big fan of over-counting words. I don't see any action. Descriptions can improve. Person layout is standard, not bad at all. The development of the world .. was something rare and without "development". Peace and good job!

Hi there! I will give you an honest review. I find this book really interesting, you as a writer, can improve a lot in the future. Though, your saying that your writing is in low quality... I suggest you shouldn't undermine yourself. There is still lots of rooms to improve. So... moving on, I want to give my honest review about this book. I placed three stars in your writing quality, it is because you didn't really mind some of the basics. And i'm quite meticulous about it. For example in your novel: 'an tiny-' Please remember that 'AN' is an article that is used before a vowel letter. When you are using a consonant letter, use the article 'A'. The correct way is 'a tiny-' not 'an tiny-' The line: (This tale begins in an insignificant galaxy with a common stellar system, in an tiny little blue Planet that, by luck, can be find in the inhabitable zone.) found in your first chapter. = Please be reminded, first chapters and first sentence introduction always gives the first impression, without a hooking introduction people wouldn't continue reading it. The first sentence or line didn't give much impact to me as a reader. I'm really sorry :(... Another thing is, what do you mean 'by luck' ? I don't really get this first part. Finding that blue planet isn't called lucky because the area is inhabitable. Find a word that could complement the whole sentence itself. Also, the dependent clause or fragment, 'can be find in the inhabitable zone', you didn't mind the past and present tense. Usually when narrating, authors uses past tense so I suggest changing it to: 'it can be found as an inhabitable zone' because your talking about the blue planet, its not the blue planet is found in an inhabitable zone, it is the blue planet that is not habitable. I'm sorry for the long review :) though it is lacking, I am just serving this as a mini guide when writing.... I hope you aren't offended

So basically he was a brain of a genius where all human died? Right So far the idea is good but not enough chapters to evaluate The writing is also good. Just waiting for more chapters to see the story and character developement.………………………………

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