The Last Wizards Of Water

The Last Wizards Of Water

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Author: Icemachine
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Expelled from the earth for being superior. Follow Mark Walker, an ordinary young man.

Due to an error in spatial movement. It is abandoned far from all the exiles.

Our protagonist will have to survive the difficulties and dangers in a new world.

Only with determination can you go ahead and pay the kindness received from your friends.

Will work to the limit to obtain wealth. He will train to break his bones to gain power. You will study until you bleed through your eyes to get knowledge. Everything to support and protect their own.

Supported by his friends and the goddess of water, he is gathering companions for this great crusade. In search of your new home.



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Ultimate_Truth
Ultimate_Truth

Your concept is not bad, your writing can improve a little, at least decide first or third person and keep it for the full paragraph. I'm giving you a good rating i hope more people get to read your work and that you improve through the advice so we all get to have fun and more chapters.

7 years ago
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Icemachine
Icemachine

Hello everyone. This story will take a while to give explanations of the character and the world. I hope you have patience and like it. The first chapters will be somewhat short but when the fundamentals are raised it will increase to 1k or 1.5k words. Thank you

7 years ago
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