Within the magical kingdom of Vasilas, every citizen wether they be a commoner or king, servant or soldier are commonly identified with the "trait" linked with their magic alignment. Those with the "honour" trait are often Knights and Nobles, those with "perseverance" are usually farmers and blacksmiths. Persephone Odius, daughter of a famous war-hero of the past enrolled in the magic academy to discover her trait and be a hero like her father... but fate had other plans.
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Very engaging introduction, with a good character development. Effective language has been used, to create a captivating start. Good job, can't wait to read the rest of the novel.
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