What does it mean to be loved?
What does it mean to be their parents’ everything?
What does it mean to be someone’s home?
Erminae didn’t really know. It wasn’t for the lack of trying. But, she thought with envy, wasn’t it just what Vicenzio had?
She saw her mother’s indifference, saw her father’s unresponsiveness. Whoever she tried hard to get close to the result was the same. She was but air for them.
She saw that woman came in with her son. She saw him get what she always desired.
Her jealousy turned her into another person, an ugly one, blinding her to other possibilities.
And ultimately, she understood, what she was searching for she would never get. This was when she finally learned to let go…
First part is completed
Omg the angst. ToT. Her books always make me cry. In a good way. When reading the Villainess Dark Side (I think that’s it name). I was legit sobbing.
The feelings and her story made me cry. I can totally relate to her. Hopefully, she can heal in time. You brought her story to life with feelings of envy, being bitter, lonely, and craving the love of the father she knew. How her life progress throughout the years was well written.I love how you foreshadow with her own words and mention it again in present which acts as a flashback. I can feel your character's pain, her bitterness, and how unfair it(everything) is to her. You've done a great job writing this. I look forward on how her story goes.
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This story is good and it did evoke the emphaty and sympathies. The author has really done a good job the narrative style was on point with a good and simple English easy to understand and follow the story and hope you will continue to write more and indeed you are such a good writer ❣️
Why you do this to me. I just woke up and accidentaly read this and now I'm crying like rivers. I feel so sorry for the MC I hope she finds someone who will shower her with love that she deserves.
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As heart wrenching as it was it was a really great story, and I couldn’t help but sympathize with her. The author really did a great job in evoking emotions of pain and hurt, and I couldn’t but just be drawn even more. Ahhh, I can’t wait for the second part.
❤️❤️❤️❤️.
Author-san, I came her from your other book, The Villainess ' Dark Side, hoping to read your amazing works. I hope you're well and fine. I'm adding this book to my library so that when you come back to complete this book I'll pick it up and read it. I hope you come back.
I am hooked!! I love this story. I dont want to sound bitter but I really hope that Erminie let it all go. Story reaching for his father affection and turn cold towards him when they met. I really wanted to show them that she does not care about them anymore and just let him be. Maybe she and her half brother may reconcile but not too fast and not tok close maybe a bit of companionship feelings. I want her to start her new life in different place far away from them but if time forbids them to meet again it would be just like a stanger passing by a hallway.
Interesting. Waiting for the next chapter. I wanna know how the characters develop especially the mc and her brother. What kind of person is mc and the brother when they grow up