Endless Samsara, Limitless Nihility
Being born in a middle class family in India, Anush grew up to be just like any other Indian. Overcoming different challenges, he pursued his aspirations of exploring the wonders of life. But fate propelled him onto a completely different journey.
A journey that will see him uncover the truth of his death,
A journey that will bring him love, hate, friendship and betrayal,
A journey that will open the door to secrets no one was privy to,
A journey that will compel Anush to conquer Endless Samsara and grasp Limitless Nihility.
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I attend a university and work part-time. So I won't be able to get any chapters out on weekdays. Most of the chapters (3 approx.) for a particular week will be published during that weekend.
Mm, Looking at the first chapter, right away I'm going to tell you that you have a major problem with the concept of "Show, don't tell." You may think that it's a bit difficult to understand because - it's literature, you're suppose to tell stuff to show events and stuff, right? But in your story you are summarizing your plot way too much. It is like reading a history book on what is going on. This person did this. This person said that. This person then... etc etc. The start is also very bland. You describe a murder occurring, but it lacks any emotional impact. As readers, we don't know what's going on nor do we care for any of the characters, so this ends up being a bad hook. I see potential in the story line, but I think your biggest problem is that your writing style is very off-putting and bland to read through. For now I'm just going to give this novel a neutral 3.
Is it like Xianxia? I see there are improvements in main character. But the world is the same as the real world. I wonder if I can expect a very big spiritual world because the story progression doesn't really match my expectations. The summary and the tag seems misleading. It would be grateful if summary can be more detailed to clear the confusion.