A Slice of Life: an Online Romance (from Aiden's point of View)

Friends please help me find next chapter am stuck.in the first chap only.. Am waiting.... Thank you... Make it soon.. And novel is intetesting.... Much curious...

I don't think I've seen a book about this subject on webnovel before. I like the concept, it's pretty interesting, I do have an advice though, it's probably gonna sound a bit corny, but here it is: ''please paint a picture with your words''. What I mean is, please give more specific details, descriptions from time to time don't hurt, trust me. I hate writing descriptions too, but they do help the plot a lot. And one more think, dear author, please write a review too! That's because when I saw the rating of this novel I almost didn't try it, it's sad, but that's the reality, better rating helps you make readers more likely to try your novel. Good luck and I hope to see more of your chapters!!!

It gets better, it really does and it’s really heart warming. Give it a chance, he’s a young author so it might seem cringe or too sappy but he’s honestly writing from his heart about something he cares about, I hope he continues to update despite the problems he might have!

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Hey. It's the author here. Sorry about the book. It's my 1st on webnovel. I didn't give it a 5 star rate cuz I'm not just someone trying to get ppl to read my book. I'm doing this so u guys kno wat I think. I agree it's fast and sry about that, but it's my first book. I will try to work on it, and I hope it gets better. Thx guys! Arigato gozainmasu!