The Torture System

I'm quite the shameless man. And so I will just you know... give myself a free 5 star. Ah god, writing 140 words is so bs. No one has time to do that.

I enjoy the book. The only thing that I don't like about the book is the grammar. Dialogue grammar needs improvement. I took grammar lessons to learn how to write dialogues correctly. If you want an example on how do it correctly then read the dialogue from my book Nirvana. I use different ways of wording the dialogue and you can use it as a model to improve your book. Nice job and keep going.

Everything is pretty good, and stable for a new book. But try to think out of the box about the pace of the story a little and background. Check out my book End Of My Boring Life

I like the book a lot. There are many mistakes in your chapters, but they're not that big of an issue. Though I do hope for more bonus chapters :))

How old are you and how many book have you read? If you really want to become a better writer then here my advice to you. Drop this book that you are writing And read other books that other have written until you completely forget about this book Then pick up this book again and re-read what you have written IT IS TERRIBLE!

The MC in this novel is matured and have an interesting system.. Also the Author is promising. Currently Im waiting for more precious update.

Great book. The author has A lot of potential. I'm new to this website and currently, this is one of my favorite books. Also since it's summer now, will you increase the chapters per week?

Love the book. I hope you can maybe increase the updates to 14 chaps per week now that it is summer. Also, can you increase the chapter size? I feel like the chapters are a bit short... Other than that nothing else :)

This is my first review, I couldn't hold back myself after reading some chapters and seeing the ratings I had to make an objective review of this novel. It's one of the worst I ever read. Absolutely nothing is good in it. Writing is horrible. Story doesn't make ANY sense (let's not talk about the lack of originality). Character make as much sense as the story. World background is inexistent. Don't lose your time.

I love this book. I hope you upload more chapters. And i hope you also increase size of chapters. Also can u upload 14 chap per week. Have a great day.

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

Just looked at the power stone counter and see that the author is just boosting their novel as much as they can. Is this more than 140 characters?

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