Starts good but went terribly wrong.
First of all, let me say that the MC is lowkey disturbing, having the soul of an older person,. but calling a 4y/o 'peerless beauty'
I like how we got a mc with a nice quirk, but it is ruined with the addition of cultivation.
Cultivation on earth just doesn't work at all. Reasons being? It's always exclusive to Chinese characters, Making Chinese superior to all other races.
Boku No Hero is a masterpiece that does not have any racial agenda at all, regardless if the top heroes are in Japan, it's written smoothly and doesn't come across as political.
Im afraid all we are gonna get in future chapters are Chinese hidden masters that are stronger than all-might, which I think is ridiculous.
The only way to save this novel is have something like an equalizer in power that is spread amongst other countries or whatever, since if are going in the route of chinese cultivation existing, then why havn't they dominated the world yet?
6 years ago
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MaSt3rKx
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6 years ago
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Deus_Dakota
Plz keep going I really like how someone finally did a hero academy one๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
6 years ago
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Darksies101
I loved the beginning of this story. it just ruin it it for me when cultivation was introduce specially to other people. the MC's dad make's it seem like cultivation is something exclusive and not a well known knowledge, but then he shout's it when the girl reveals her cultivation base and no one seems surprise about cultivation terms.
6 years ago
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AloofPanda
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5 years ago
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uflesh940
Interesting idea but it's just so badly written. Remember capitalization, sentence structure, and basic grammar? The author apparently doesn't, so good luck if you want to read this.
Definitely something I would recommend to friends, its the first time Ive read a cultivation/boku mo her acadamia and its great. My only problem is that somethings he doesnt explaim amd makes him seem like a stalker, lime every day for 10 months he watch midoriya train and it doesnt explain why, kinda creepy.
6 years ago
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Ttnumber2
Keep up the good work ok Iโm enjoying this a lot ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
6 years ago
1
God_of_hentai
so recently i saw a meme about boku no pico and mha mixed together terrible thing and when i read this title i was grossed out completely and was about to curse u with the ntr curse but nvm its not what i thought it was
3 years ago
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kenlinvert1
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4 years ago
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Starts good but went terribly wrong. First of all, let me say that the MC is lowkey disturbing, having the soul of an older person,. but calling a 4y/o 'peerless beauty' I like how we got a mc with a nice quirk, but it is ruined with the addition of cultivation. Cultivation on earth just doesn't work at all. Reasons being? It's always exclusive to Chinese characters, Making Chinese superior to all other races. Boku No Hero is a masterpiece that does not have any racial agenda at all, regardless if the top heroes are in Japan, it's written smoothly and doesn't come across as political. Im afraid all we are gonna get in future chapters are Chinese hidden masters that are stronger than all-might, which I think is ridiculous. The only way to save this novel is have something like an equalizer in power that is spread amongst other countries or whatever, since if are going in the route of chinese cultivation existing, then why havn't they dominated the world yet?
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Plz keep going I really like how someone finally did a hero academy one๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I loved the beginning of this story. it just ruin it it for me when cultivation was introduce specially to other people. the MC's dad make's it seem like cultivation is something exclusive and not a well known knowledge, but then he shout's it when the girl reveals her cultivation base and no one seems surprise about cultivation terms.
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Interesting idea but it's just so badly written. Remember capitalization, sentence structure, and basic grammar? The author apparently doesn't, so good luck if you want to read this.
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Definitely something I would recommend to friends, its the first time Ive read a cultivation/boku mo her acadamia and its great. My only problem is that somethings he doesnt explaim amd makes him seem like a stalker, lime every day for 10 months he watch midoriya train and it doesnt explain why, kinda creepy.
Keep up the good work ok Iโm enjoying this a lot ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
so recently i saw a meme about boku no pico and mha mixed together terrible thing and when i read this title i was grossed out completely and was about to curse u with the ntr curse but nvm its not what i thought it was
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
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