A One Piece System in a Cultivation World

If you like my novel or hate it, please write a review! No matter if it's good or bad, it leaves me much more inspiration to write chapters than power stones!

its a good novel but its limited by the amount of chapters, this doesn't mean you have to increase the amount of chapters immediately and do poor quality chapters 1 chapter a weak would be fine, though i liked how you made the fiancé actually like him instead of being the usual prideful and cold ones that we normally see.

Really love how it starts off. Looking forward to see how this novel turns out and how the Main characters developments but im also wondering if he will have many wives in the future.

Since the Author wants to improve i might as well share my thoughts on the first few chapters. You know already after a few chapters that the novel wont be a thought through Story and will go more into the wishfullfillment-category. The start is as generic as it could possibly be. The harem wont get any build up and the first girl is just there after some excuses and badly written confrontation with your generic young master. The System perfectly suits this wishfullfillment; The author can give his MC what he wants through a Lottery and doesnt even care enough about his Story to even stick with the op-theme. Character development is basically a farce here, the mc grasps his power after some sweating and meditation and shits all over onepiece greatest point: letting your character grow through hardship and friendship. Really curios how you would balance the powerlevels since everything past immortal stage would just nuke the whole op world, so better think about something like bodycultivation+paramecia/zoan or your magical abilitys which go well with his fruit to bring in some depth. Logias are the weakest in this world since everyone can manipulate energy to counter your energyform and its a known weakness in op that every logia has a counter. Wish you good luck and i hope you improve enough for your next story to be successful and a bit more thought through :)

Write more because i fucking love it dont drop this plssss Plsss_ Dont drop this please I love this I love your work I will donate stone everytime you upload new chapter so dont let me down. 😊

Well! I hope you can update more chapters for this novel, and i want to ask did the MC can eat more than one devil fruit? Well, if it does then you should let the MC get the reward to Allow It from the System!

I love the beginning and how you started the story, but the only problem I have would be a power indicator, like how strong the mc is or some stats. As you have a cultivator world stats shouldn’t matter too much, but cultivation lv or comparison would be nice. (Also know you just started, so it can come later)

IN A NUT: MC is reborn in a cultivation world with Mod.One piece system[just like in the name] to find himself in a trash body and engaged to a "tsundere" genius fiancee... And to prove himself he leaves on a journey.... REVIEW: Simply awesome.. the system is like the ANIME SYSTEM gone undercover... but HULK LIKES!!!

The story so far is great. The system has a lot of things, but will the MC be able to change his race or like be come a hybrid/Halfling? Like in ————— [once human, now a parasite] Race: Demon 50/100, Elf 25/100, dragon 25/100 ————— What I’m trying to say is- will he have other races’ bloodlines in him? Like saiyan, devils(dxd), or any other race? I’m curious!!!

Love this one, hoping that you will release more chapters🤗 And wait can he eat 2 or more devil fruits.. D*mn this 140 character D*mn this 140 character D*mn this 140 character D*mn this 140 character

i think the story is good just hope he is not gonna be to op in the beginning cause that would make it a bit hard to read because he would aleays win and so

I really wanted to read something like this for a really long time but no one made one until now I would have made one myself but I'm not talented enough to write properly so I really appreciate that your writing this.

Stop dropping novels. If you plan on writing, intend to finish it. Bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbi*jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjnnjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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