A young prince. A life changing lineage. Once a prosperous continent, Ithreal bends to the wicked bonds of war. Leo Dornan has the power to end the war or pursue the man who imprisoned and tortured him. He can change not only his fate, but that of Ithreal, its citizens, and its invaders. What will he choose?

Creed of Vengeance

Much like 1959cayla I would have to say that plot moved too quickly but the story seems interesting and I would love to see how both the characters and your writing style develop.
Good Book so far

You need to work on your grammar and plot production. I thought character analysis was lacking. Plot moved too quickly in pace and leaves no room for anticipation. I enjoy or literature technique and am thankful you write. If you carry on down the same path you have the potential to be really good and writing. ❤💋Otherwise it is really good.☺👌

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