YA BOIS IN SOME RACKETY ASS TOWN IN SOME SPOOK ASS PLACE AND HE GOT A GHOST WAIFU MAN, HOW COOL DAT BE?? HE AINT NO WALLA WALLA CULTIVATOR VOODOO, HE BE THE REAL OG GHOSTBUSTER NUTBUSTER YOU HEAR ME??
6 years ago
4
TrueDawn
I can't really say much about the story as it only has one chapter, but so far it's looking good. Immersion wasn't broken at all, the characters had their unique characteristics which made them have life, and the setting of the chapter was well described. I would like to see where this goes next.
6 years ago
1
BriarRose
It's got character, I'll tell you that. Descriptions of the surroundings are nice and to the point, but not too long. I've only read one chapter, but I am very much looking forward to how this story will turn out.
YA BOIS IN SOME RACKETY ASS TOWN IN SOME SPOOK ASS PLACE AND HE GOT A GHOST WAIFU MAN, HOW COOL DAT BE?? HE AINT NO WALLA WALLA CULTIVATOR VOODOO, HE BE THE REAL OG GHOSTBUSTER NUTBUSTER YOU HEAR ME??
I can't really say much about the story as it only has one chapter, but so far it's looking good. Immersion wasn't broken at all, the characters had their unique characteristics which made them have life, and the setting of the chapter was well described. I would like to see where this goes next.
It's got character, I'll tell you that. Descriptions of the surroundings are nice and to the point, but not too long. I've only read one chapter, but I am very much looking forward to how this story will turn out.