The Self-Proclaimed Adventurer

The Self-Proclaimed Adventurer

Fantasy7 Chapters43.9K Views
Author: Yeeker
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The story of a 15 year-old who lost his parents and has to carry “the weight of his family”. After deciding to abandon his responsibilities he comes to a near death experiences and gets something that will change his life forever.———————



I am a new author and this is my first novel. I would like to see comments and reviews on my chapters to know they are being read. I’d like opinions and suggestions. Don’t be scared to hurt my feelings.

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Siegfrized
Siegfrized

Cant wait to see next chapter

7 years ago
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AffirmedZeus56
AffirmedZeus56

Transitions from background to the ‘current’ time is a little rough, but the story grabs u in the beginning, keeps u interested with just enough excitement and intriguing details that just kept me hooked. Im pretty particular about my books and lots of things bother me when the book isnt written well, (grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc.) but if the story line is good enough, ill keep reading. I really like it!

6 years ago
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