Hi people
This is a self review and I tried to make it as non biased as possible
I would like it if people didn't post non related review here
For all readers it is a sincere request to read the story and judge for yourself whether it is worth your time
Constructive criticism are always appreciated on the other hand
6 years ago
3
Alex543
It's similar to a fanfiction I read before it's called Illimitable Until Death I'm not sure how to express the similarities of the two, but it's still in it's starting point so I can't be too sure about it
7 years ago
1
frangky
I think this novel have a good potential. Also I think rather the mc change appearance, I think you use it like persona 4. I think that will be cool. Hehehe 😉😉😉
6 years ago
0
thereallydepressed
i dont know why people would say this is a copy but i've read abit about illimitable until death and i dont find them rally similar honestly i think this novel is fine and is not a copy of illimitable until death. so keep it up and slow down the stories going too fast add some character developement.
6 years ago
0
Bilbo_The_Kid
this is just a absolut shameless copy of holistic fantasy + some elements from Illimitable Until Death. I understand if you take some ideas from other novels but chapter 2 3 and 4 were 99% copies from holistic
Shame on you.
7 years ago
0
al_MM
For the record I have a writer and I will send you the gamer tag........14014014014014014014014914068'#+&#-#-#-#-#-#--#-#-#-#-#-#-#&#&&#&#&#&#&#-&⅞7'&-&'+&-8'-+:-+:+-&---'-+:'--:::-::::::::::::-------&-:--:--+++++++++-:---------------------;;++() uhthhu it is you want download
Hi people This is a self review and I tried to make it as non biased as possible I would like it if people didn't post non related review here For all readers it is a sincere request to read the story and judge for yourself whether it is worth your time Constructive criticism are always appreciated on the other hand
It's similar to a fanfiction I read before it's called Illimitable Until Death I'm not sure how to express the similarities of the two, but it's still in it's starting point so I can't be too sure about it
I think this novel have a good potential. Also I think rather the mc change appearance, I think you use it like persona 4. I think that will be cool. Hehehe 😉😉😉
i dont know why people would say this is a copy but i've read abit about illimitable until death and i dont find them rally similar honestly i think this novel is fine and is not a copy of illimitable until death. so keep it up and slow down the stories going too fast add some character developement.
this is just a absolut shameless copy of holistic fantasy + some elements from Illimitable Until Death. I understand if you take some ideas from other novels but chapter 2 3 and 4 were 99% copies from holistic Shame on you.
For the record I have a writer and I will send you the gamer tag........14014014014014014014014914068'#+&#-#-#-#-#-#--#-#-#-#-#-#-#&#&&#&#&#&#&#-&⅞7'&-&'+&-8'-+:-+:+-&---'-+:'--:::-::::::::::::-------&-:--:--+++++++++-:---------------------;;++() uhthhu it is you want download