Selfish Battle

can't wait to know further... did Valz kiss mariza because he only wanted to discover the truth or he himself loves mariza?... author... speed up dear..

You did a good job! The story is good. Writing is Vivid and graphic. Take whatever I say as advice from a friend As a reader, I skip a lot, mostly descriptions, if they are very long. Try to keep the writing style ******. That is what I felt. Good luck!

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The story is good. I love the male chatacter, I love how arrogant he is. HAHAHA! Super cool. I am curious as to how their love story will grow. The novel is good. Kudos Author! Good job😊😊

I enjoyed the back and forth between the main characters. I think what they do and what they are thinking are different at times. You explain each sentence beautifully. I just wish the chapters were longer. I feel like the breaks between chapters makes the events lose their momentum. Overall I see where this story is heading and it seems interesting. I'm not into romance focused stories, but this one feels very refreshing. Best of luck to you author.

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: Try to come up with and stick to an update schedule, even if that means not posting every chapter you complete when you complete it. Positive Feedback: Well written, original plot. Good update rate. You definitely know how to be descriptive.;,;. Personal Feedback: I see much promise for the future of this novel. Sadly, this novel holds no interest to me, therefore I will not be continuing it any further. Scores: WQ 5/5 SoU 4/5 SD 5/5 CD 5/5 WB 4/5

The story is interesting but seems to be targeted towards teenagers. Maybe it was because of the names but it felt like Spanish soap operas. There was quite a few grammatical mistakes in the earlier chapters. They are less noticeable in the later chapters. Paragraphs can be too long sometimes. Since some of the chapters can be quite short, it would be good if you can update more often.

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I also not into romance story much less from female POV but for giving a fair review. I proudly read it! I can see your improvement chapter by chapter. In early chapter, there a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes but decreasing as the story go on.. You can edit previous chapter you know.. Do consider space after (.) or (,)

It's a good day to give another review to my favorite author. You're always welcome if you need help with your "boosting". I hope saying that you're a girl and 15 would help in anyway, coz' they don't, even if you put it on every argument. XD

I love this novel this is one of the best story have ever read but it shouldn't end here wish it had a part can't wait for it return 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

The story is really great so far. There are a lot of twists and drama which leaves me wanting more. At this point in the story, anything could happen. The possibilities are endless and I can’t wait to read how the story unfolds. Great work so far Author ❤️😘

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