Marvel's Ultra-Saiyan
If you have an issue with my writing skills then I can only say sorry because I don't have enough time to do a recheck but if I find any mistakes when I have time I will fix the errors.
But if your eyes hurt and you don't think it is making you feel bad then please do me a favor and stop reading this no one is forcing you to read this book.
Please do note this book is not only for you but also for me to pass my free time and at the same time, I want to create a good FF for my self to enjoy in the time to come. I am not a professional writer just passing time.
Any suggestions are welcomed as long as you don't curse at me.
Also if anyone wants to become the editor for this book than you are also welcome and I will send the character to that particular person first before posting it but know that I won't be paying you as I also don't earn anything from it.
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Death is never a good thing.
But no matter who or how strong you remember you will have to die one day whether you like it or not.
But if you have to save everyone you care and love then you might not think twice to sacrifice yourself to save them but in his case, Bruce had to sacrifice even his soul together with his body in order to use his final attack on his Enemy Fuu from Dragon Ball world where he reincarnated by somehow while going to the Midtown High but he doesn't know what happened after his ultimate sacrifice in the Dragon Ball world but one thing he knows is that he is back.
Yes, he is back on Earth where he was born and what do you know he is on the same bus of Midtown High, and from the looks of it he was sleeping all along.
So does that mean the things that happen in the Dragon Ball world was just his dream?
Was he sleeping all along?
If that is the case how can he remember everything?
How can he feel he is a lot weaker then he was in the previous world?
The most important thing is he can use all the knowledge from that world as if they are real.
So doesn't that mean he wasn't dreaming all along and everything was real?
Also, more importantly, did he really arrive in his previous world, or is this some alternative world.
To know to join us in the grand adventures of Bruce Wayne the Supreme God Of Time.
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Also, try to give some good reviews if you have time and once it is above 4 stars I will update the chapters regularly.
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3.5 for now update was slow. Is this going to be like other chinese reincarnated fanfic on marvel and etc? And so boastful and always say how chinese culture and china superior to another country and have mild to heavy bashing some other country like japan and others? I was assume like this coz I always read that kind of attitude on fanfic which chinese man reincarnated on some american man and always tell how superior china was on everything, for example like Marvels Immortal Throne, Marvels the King and many more. And I always drop that kind of fic when I saw signs of that. I hope this fic too didn't leave the path like others.
Interesting... I'll let the chapters build up first, but if you don't drop it and it turns out good then you'll have my support. Also my stones. Depends on how good it is.
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is this good in later chapters?? early chapters are very bad.....girls are brainless around MC.... characters aren't thinking straight... conversations are very much a mess....even world background is a mess.....scene break are very confusing.... grammar and spelling is also bad. Concept is very good but... presentation is bad.
waste of time at the beginning he went to school and after 4 chapters he was still at school and I stopped reading it irrelevant information plus mc is kinda dumb if you have lived to lived and in one you are a God your facial expression shouldn't change When your thinking i understand that he doesn't have powers but mental things should be there and Autor only says he has spiky black hair that's it
the name reminded me of a joke from tfs, here ill share it with you guys: Vegeta: As for me, I will find a level beyond a Super Saiyan! Tien: ...So, what? Like a "Mega Saiyan"? "Ultra Saiyan"? Vegeta: ...You're mocking me— Tien: "Maximum Over-Saiyan"! Vegeta: F**k off, Triclo**! (flies away)
Not bad but I was wondering if there's going to polygamy or a harem in this? Cuz most fanfics have them and it get's boring when they all have the same aspects.
While i like a slow paced story, this is slowly make me bored, what i mean is it is ok to give credit to side character but a good story will also make the development of the MC clear it is not training maniac if you think it is what i mean. But hey this story is pretty interesting with DBZ and Marvel crossover but i remember this is a fan fiction, while i like slow paced story but i worry for the continually of this story like i doubt some fan fic can finish it's story with it's slow paced development, even only minority of story in this platform reach 200+ chap. The grammar for me is average for non english speaker (like me), character design is much but too shallow, world background too small and too little surprise element. I think that's it from me. Hope this review can give the story better development 😄
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Writing quality could be improved immensely. MC lost all semblance of intelligence in front Jean, quite off putting. ------------------------------------------------
Good fanfic novel should got a 5 star review......................................... Pretty unique 👌😍😍. ..................... ............
Its pretty good, better than most marvel fanfiction... Hope it update 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩.........................................................
So far it's somewhat readable. I can tell what's happening in the story, but by god is the grammar awful. Story moves a bit strangely and i'm not sure how I feel about you mixing up DC and Marvel elements. It never ends well.
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