Enjoyed this far
Can't give a to insight opion cuz there are only 6 chapters but till now the story came along pretty good
The "Devil and God" thing for me was a bit to forced but the rest flowed
The fighting scens are a bit "meh" but still good enough for start
For the grammar can't say much and can't point mistakes
For a first novel(i think) is really good
7 years ago
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smktheslayer
Shameless 5 star self-rating because i'm very confident i can pull a George R Martin on this novel.
Lol jokes apart, this is my first novel on webnovel and hopefully not the last.
Constructive criticisms very welcome.
Trolling and flaming ? not so much...
Be patient and help me on the path of becoming a true writting expert *eyes full of conviction*
Rate this novel and vote to keep me doing a good work!
Enjoyed this far Can't give a to insight opion cuz there are only 6 chapters but till now the story came along pretty good The "Devil and God" thing for me was a bit to forced but the rest flowed The fighting scens are a bit "meh" but still good enough for start For the grammar can't say much and can't point mistakes For a first novel(i think) is really good
Shameless 5 star self-rating because i'm very confident i can pull a George R Martin on this novel. Lol jokes apart, this is my first novel on webnovel and hopefully not the last. Constructive criticisms very welcome. Trolling and flaming ? not so much... Be patient and help me on the path of becoming a true writting expert *eyes full of conviction* Rate this novel and vote to keep me doing a good work!