Hacking Laifu
Rey was pulling an all-nighter in his dormitory, playing pokemon roms.
After finally beating the elite 4, he did the thing he always does and beat it again but in record time as he used an uber tier shiny legendary team.
Having had his fun he was getting ready for bed, but for some reason, he muttered under his breath
"Man if only I could play real life in hack mode too, playing games the legit way is too boring"
That was the moment his life changed as what seemed to be a passing falling star, lite up the room he was in a soft blue hue, before disappearing quietly.
[Hack mode activated]
"Ooo about time I get another lucid dream again....wait doesn't this seem too real!?"
Just having something to write about guys, so no schedule for this novel yet.
What in the actual fish am I reading?! Story Premise (3 out of 5): - MC got a system. Got supernatural elements going on. Not much can be said. There's no end goal, or at least, an objective for now. Writing Quality (4 out of 5): - A lot of swearing. I mean, literally every dialogue of the MC has curse words in it. I don't mind but the MC is pretty carefree with his choice of words. Pretty straightforward way of explaining stuff. (Really straightforward). Grammar is alright, but need more more unique vocabulary. Chapter Updates (5 out of 5): - Check the Table of Contents. Story Development (4 out of 5): - Pretty fast-paced, which I like! A lot of leveling up in short amount of chapters. Little has been explained so far aside from playing with the system. (Mana and vampire spotted.) Like I said, a bunch of supernatural stuff put in without much context. Characters (3 out of 5): -Wow. The MC is just straight up hateful. He literally curse everyone that he don't like, or gets a little bit on his nerves. Need to calm down once in a while. A little bit positive sometimes, but a whole lot of negativity on his side. I suggest he get some form of therapy quick. World (3 out of 5): - I don't know where in the world is the MC aside from little description of the surrounding. What is the name of his dorm? How does his class look like? How does his room look like? How old is he? Important Suggestion; - Slow down a bit and describe more of the characters and the surrounding. The MC just love for me to hate him with his . . . interesting choice of words.
Hello Author, I like your novel so far and will therefore give it a 4 star rating for now. Naturally, this is all bound to change as the story moves on. I just thought that this review would help to get your novel noticed since a lot of people look at the amount of stars before clicking on a novel, and seeing as you don't have enough, I thought it would be a good idea to do to motivate you.
I LOVE THA BOOK. I do have a suggestion maybe you can have a harem come into play???? Please I need a harem of all kinds of girls it would make me very happy:)
Ideia divertida com fundo decente e profundidade. O personagem principal extremamente idiota e a gramática atroz dificultam a leitura. Se você pode ignorar a gramática, pode ser divertido 👍👍👍
More chappies and keep up the good work author, im enjoying it so far. zzxxxxxxxxxxxxccxxxcccxxxxxxxxxxxxxzzxxxxxxzxzzxxxxzzxxxxxxzz,zzzzzzzzzxxxxxxz
great so far keep up the good work.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
love how the start is keep up the good work and please dont drop it. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
So far so good I'd like to see how this story goes, by the way what's the release rate? ...............,......,.......,.......,........,......,.....,..
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Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation Funyyyy ! 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
At first i like it but after reading chapter 11 i don't 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
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More chappies and keep up the good work author, im enjoying it so far. zzxxxxxxxxxxxxccxxxcccxxxxxxxxxxxxxzzxxxxxxzxzzxxxxzzxxxxxxzz,zzzzzzzzzxxxxxxz