Mother Of All Systems!!
So basically our MC is an unlucky fellow his whole life is a mess.
Orphan at the age of 3 when his parents got involve in some accidents.
Growing up with no friends.
Grades are so-so
Don't even mention a girlfriend
Well basically everything he does nothing comes good.
And then he start watching animes reading novels and Mangas he really got addicted and decided to commit suicide in letting himself got rekt by truck-kun.
After he saw a truck in the distance he started walking slowly to the center of the road but little did he know there's an open manhole near just infront of him.
The last second he remember is the feeling of falling.
Follow the disastrous life of Clay's adventure on obtaining different SYSTEMS!!!
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Cover not mine.... CTTO
Hehe hello guys first time Author here hope you like my first book😊😊.......................... F*ck this 140 characters limit...........................................
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will give this rating as it just the first chapter but wil increase if next chapter is good and i wanted to ask u how many chapter u can release per day or in one week time. For the first chapter i quite like it as the mc drop into a hole instead of getting hit by a truck but it kinda weird as a hole will appeared out of nowhere well i guess it his unlucky ability .Hope u can make more and i am intrested in the next chapter on wat system he will choose and is intrigue as he can choose more system as he is getting stronger so it means he is not very op like saitama in the start but will slowly getting stronger .Hope u can release more daily :3 i support u GAMBATEH
Honestly I am not impressed with this novel for a number of reasons the main one being the the writing quality. The number of times the author starts a sentence without capitalizing is enough to drive anyone crazy. Then when you add in the misuse of pronouns such as his her he and she it becomes a mess. The author also needs to keep track of his math better stating he was awarded 5000sp for a quest and only showing 1000 on the stats page without any store purchases then jumping from 1000 to 8000 with no notice that he gained anything. Another example is where the system suggests he purchase an upgrade for 150sp for him to state he doesn't have enough and to notify him when he did. In that same chapter it shows him having 8000sp which is more than enough to cover a 150sp purchase. I highly suggest the author find an editor for this novel to help him fix said errors before continuing.
It's mind blowing the story is superb and like the way it's going. Eating for it's next update, been a lot time but coming soon😎😎. Wanna known when the mc will get his next system and also gets transmitted to next world I wish he will😜😜
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Author san good work. Don't lose hope on urself that u can't write good novel, it's one of the best I have read so far. We will be waiting for ur new release soon. Keep up the good work author San.
This **** goes down when he *died*. Sigh. And with all those none existence interaction between character. Dissapointed as fuxk................................. .....
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
i like the general story line and the concept......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Grammar makes it annoying to read as you first have to decipher what he is trying to say. The math on some things is messed up, but overall not the worst story I've read. I will continue reading to see if the author improves.
hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it? hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?
Great system novel so far, and hope its not HAREM. .....................................................................................................................
still at the early chappy, gonna change it when at least 30++ .......................................................... ...............................................................................................................................