Hey Webnovelist!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email bishop_white@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
4 years ago
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BookGhost
Dear author:
I like the idea but doesnt seem to be properly developed because of the plot being too rushed and the setup during the first chapter having quite few holes in its common sense related to crime scenes and post-birth policies and the soon to be main character stands too much and falls in the "edgy-boy" spectrum.
I'll keep replying to this review to add new things but that is it for now. I hope you can correct these bits and pieces and make this story have the start it deserves
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email bishop_white@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Dear author: I like the idea but doesnt seem to be properly developed because of the plot being too rushed and the setup during the first chapter having quite few holes in its common sense related to crime scenes and post-birth policies and the soon to be main character stands too much and falls in the "edgy-boy" spectrum. I'll keep replying to this review to add new things but that is it for now. I hope you can correct these bits and pieces and make this story have the start it deserves