Second Chance War

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Author: Hokobishu
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Thomas awoke on a cold hard metal surface.



"I'm alive...?"



Thomas Conlin was a Staff Sergeant during the Second World War...at least until he was killed in an ambush.



Brought back to life by a seemingly unknown power and given some powers of his own, can he learn to master his gifts, or will they destroy him and everything he's ever fought for?



Read on as Thomas finds himself in an upward struggle between the hidden forces of the world.

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LWEndless
LWEndless

A great start, full of authentic detail, to an intentive take on the alternative history genre. Worth a read for anyone interested in World War 2.

6 years ago
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Hokobishu
Hokobishu

Shameless review! This story may be for you if you are looking for a novel with: a) No magic b) The grittiness and horror of war c) Reliving the greatest war in our history d) Nazi experiments e) Hitler riding a Saber-tooth Tiger on his birthday f) Skipping E because it sounds dumb If any of these appeal to you, this might be the right novel for you! Multiple chapter releases every weekend, I try to write a chapter per day on the weekdays! Instant contact with the author! There are several ways to contact me and I always reply to my comments!

6 years ago
4
MerielDaMery
MerielDaMery

Enough with this **** why hasn't this been reviewed more c'mon the concept of the story is great and historically grounded. Plus it's very realistic because no bull**** OP super powers just grit and gut mixed with skill. just try it .....""drops the mic"""......

6 years ago
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WinterBud
WinterBud

GIVE IT A TRY, GOOD GOD, JUST READ A FEW PARAGRAPHS (and ignore the minor grammar misses, psst, author, install a Grammarly widget to help you edit before you publish, might also want to go back to all the chapters to iron out most of the kinks [e.g., please capitalize "german/y"], that would make this perfect) THE AUTHOR CLEARLY KNOWS WHAT HE'S DOING. My only gripe: I'm in love with Angela Merkel, and I really like what Germany has become 70+ years after WWII, so I guess being reminded of their horrible past makes me a little uncomfortable, but that's my problem as a reader. I have a similar problem with Japan's horrible actions against other nations in the past. I've only read up to chapter 3, but I'll def be reading on.

6 years ago
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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XD

2 years... jajaja ⌚:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

3 years ago
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ikoyo
ikoyo

Another nice chapter. The twist is in the MC lining up on the British commando. The British and Americans were allies in World War 2. Am kind of confused as to why they should be short at by their American allies.

5 years ago
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ikoyo
ikoyo

Another great chapter. The author has delivered another masterpiece. Nice work. All your efforts are appreciated by readers like me. Please try to increase the frequency of releasing each chapter.

5 years ago
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DeJeL
DeJeL

Reveal Spoiler

6 years ago
1
DamnPlotArmor
DamnPlotArmor

Amazing concept and story! Though, there are typos here and there, but it can be ignored because the story was so captivating. 140140140140

6 years ago
1
Celestial_monk
Celestial_monk

I like it...................................... i dont have nothing to say as i dont want people to seee my review before reading the novel.............................................................. Why are you still reading fuk off

6 years ago
1
ikoyo
ikoyo

Great work. Good knowledge of the Italian campaign. The author has a good grasp of military operations and the chain of command. The description of events are so vivid that i can literally picture the actions as they are unfolding. The use of suspense is wonderful. In fact a big kudos to the author and a bug thank you to web novel for giving the author the platform to express himself.

6 years ago
1
killermniko
killermniko

The story seems good. Having been around the Army, a few things in the story bothered me. Physical fitness training didn't get regulized till the late 1940s. Most draftees got little to no training at all and were shipped out. I guess I can chalk it up to the time traveling. My experience with "Army Leaders" suggest they would not change their ways from just a dcument, but that's just my opinion. Overall, I like how you presented creative training environments for the recruits. The story flows really well and descriptive conversation. The story has a grand objective and moving towards it. A definite must read for those interested in a twist on real life events. ------------------------------------------------ The writing done well. I found almost no mistakes. 5/5 You are regularly updating the novel and posted a new chapter frequently. 5/5 The story is going along very well. We know the goal and the motivation for the characters which is very important. 5/5 The main character is refreshing and has a sense of purpose to the story. 5/5 The only thing, I feel your story lacking good background descriptions. I've read quite a few diaries and retaleing of wars from POV books. The stories list so many details such as the smells, the sights, and the sounds. I think with a bit more descriptions you would have a fantastic story. 4/5 Either way, super exciting story. Best of luck to you author.

6 years ago
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BoredPanda
BoredPanda

GREAT CONCEPT!!! Writing Quality is really great, easily understandable sentences, wide range of vocabulary, it's amazing how you describe war scenes. Stability of Updates is also good, no complaints. Story Development is GREAT!! Going back in time, changing the course of events and how the war will result. Amazingly executed scenes. Character Design is great, soldiers in the war zone, how unique. World Background is also good. Overall, it's great. The first chapter already got me so hooked I can't stop reading. I'll be adding this on my Library and I hope this story will continue to the end.

6 years ago
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leorichard2021_0515
leorichard2021_0515

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

3 years ago
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sdoryfinder
sdoryfinder

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

4 years ago
0