Alphonse who got fired at his workplace decide to make fortune by playing virtual reality online games.
Grand Fantasia, a game that connect reality and fantasy.
sistem notification: congratulation you unlocked hidden class!
Alphonse: Open status window!
Alphonse (level 1)
Class: Jobless
Alphonse: ...........
I think this will be a good novel. Good start. Not the best stary but its good for me and yeah, i think this will be a fun and its very interesting novel. Work hard. Good job author.
Hey bro? I think you need to put damage output and like the hp of the rabbit like that? Thanks for the updates and i hope you consider suggestions. Thanks a lot.
I think the beginning of the story it's decent The writing are somewhat lacking but it's not that bad The storyline is good, the joke are somewhat funny, i think the story will become better each chapter Keep up your work author
Allright i'am not gonna lie to myself altough my grammar it's not that good but i think it's still readable update at least 10 chapter a week story development slightly slow paced but it's gonna fun after 10+ chapter character design it's okay world background it's also okay i think