This fanfiction is very engaging really suck you into the story. The mc has just the right amount of bloodlust and power, as in can still be hurt if lowering his defence. However the best part is the romance that is what made me stay couldn’t stop reading. I personally prefer more action and fights with plenty of oppppness but i find this Very heart warming while badass at the same time, how u managed to pull that off i have no idea but it works really well at that
Please take my stones haha no rly im giving stones so u better not drop this like the others -.-
Thanks for taking the time to write this and gl on future chapters
6 years ago
4
DollShururu
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2 years ago
1
AEON_
this is just trash
mc is a pedophile
initially it was interesting but author ruined by introducing lily in this novel
author u shall burn in hell for eternity.
4 years ago
1
Maurz
Was good until you decided to make the mc A PEDOPHILE, not cute not cool just fukin weird. Author must have a disability....... ..........
5 years ago
1
attibut
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5 years ago
1
Zeferath
To narrow down the author he can take any route his stage setting is excellent not to mention he has stayed a way fro trying to create a world view so if he chooses to pick narrow paths for the story they will stack in time and create that view from my perspective the author has done a heck of a job with this context and I offer my hat to him for his unique view and writing style. It's not often you see a growth setting character with minor with steady grow and now plot holes
6 years ago
1
Zeferath
..... pop and ............ sizzle that was a corner turn to face plastered with surprise built to just carry out and Invision life that could be as I would love to have his life the story built a path and I followed like a lost duckling
6 years ago
1
ROnin2k
Yes! How much i wanted a Venom fiction
Hope he will lose all morals and become a killing machine
Maybe harem but i hope for blood,gore,death and madness SO MUCH MADNESS
6 years ago
1
Otakusalem
Nice idea great setting 5stars since you chose venom s powers really liked the movie hope you keep it up and more more updates 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
6 years ago
1
Twice_James153
Even though the MC is a duckin' PEDO, it's a nice story overall and I would love it, if the author continued writing it...
Definetly worth a read!
The story is really good, i like the combination of the different universes......
my only problem is that there is not enough action.... but the story is good more or less
6 years ago
0
hilp
It took me by surprise I couldn't take my eyes of it one of the few I picked at random but worth the read that is for sure. Clap.Clap.Clap bravo
This fanfiction is very engaging really suck you into the story. The mc has just the right amount of bloodlust and power, as in can still be hurt if lowering his defence. However the best part is the romance that is what made me stay couldn’t stop reading. I personally prefer more action and fights with plenty of oppppness but i find this Very heart warming while badass at the same time, how u managed to pull that off i have no idea but it works really well at that Please take my stones haha no rly im giving stones so u better not drop this like the others -.- Thanks for taking the time to write this and gl on future chapters
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this is just trash mc is a pedophile initially it was interesting but author ruined by introducing lily in this novel author u shall burn in hell for eternity.
Was good until you decided to make the mc A PEDOPHILE, not cute not cool just fukin weird. Author must have a disability....... ..........
Reveal Spoiler
To narrow down the author he can take any route his stage setting is excellent not to mention he has stayed a way fro trying to create a world view so if he chooses to pick narrow paths for the story they will stack in time and create that view from my perspective the author has done a heck of a job with this context and I offer my hat to him for his unique view and writing style. It's not often you see a growth setting character with minor with steady grow and now plot holes
..... pop and ............ sizzle that was a corner turn to face plastered with surprise built to just carry out and Invision life that could be as I would love to have his life the story built a path and I followed like a lost duckling
Yes! How much i wanted a Venom fiction Hope he will lose all morals and become a killing machine Maybe harem but i hope for blood,gore,death and madness SO MUCH MADNESS
Nice idea great setting 5stars since you chose venom s powers really liked the movie hope you keep it up and more more updates 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Even though the MC is a duckin' PEDO, it's a nice story overall and I would love it, if the author continued writing it... Definetly worth a read!
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The story is really good, i like the combination of the different universes...... my only problem is that there is not enough action.... but the story is good more or less
It took me by surprise I couldn't take my eyes of it one of the few I picked at random but worth the read that is for sure. Clap.Clap.Clap bravo