Rebirth of humanity
Author: squid
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Humans once wielded formidable magical power but with over 7 billion people Mana was spread far to thinly to have any effect. When hostile aliens reduce humanity's to a mere fraction of survivors the discover a an old power had begun to awaken.
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this is constructive criticism 1 this is based on the spider that's not going to work the only thing different from that is twin spider man and less words you need to change things up or your going to write your self in a corner look at Dial (Ben 10/MCU SI) it should show you what to do and https://***.fanfiction.net/s/12693048/1/The-Goblin those should be what you are looking for in your novel you should also get away from spider man stuff what you're looking for is self insert so less into spider more mention of other hero's and work on romance make it work because the spider had harem yet it was believable and in real life it seems it would work
Hey Bro plz look at chapter 2 I think its wrong one you uploaded by mistake Bro keepUp with upload speed.....................///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////