Harem insect women (+18)

Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong🐜🐜🐜

Even thought I gave this a low overall rating it is still really good. I just think this story need more focus, maybe English speaking editor and longer chapters. But over all this idea and story are really good so far.

It's a nice story, but couldn't you add leveling and evolution system. I mean how are we going to tell he is getting stronger. But regarding everything else it's good.

Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong🐝🐝🐝

Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong🐜🐜🐜

Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong🕷🕷🕷

Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong🐞🐞🐞

Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong🐝🐝🐝

Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong🐜🐜🐜

Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong🕷🕷🕷

Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong🐞🐞🐞

Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong🐝🐝🐝

Reviewer: your grammar sucks. Writer: hey **** you, it was a styistic... Reviewer: no, it wasn't a stylistic choice just lazy writing. Why the **** am I using the bull**** narration style now. The reviewer turned away angrily from the writer. "It was a good idea. I like harem stories." He slammed his fist into the wall. "But you couldn't write a fucking grammatically correct sentence for prose," the reviewer stomped away leaving the reviewing room. "I can't deal with this ****." The reviewers voice faded as he left. Writer: well ****... The reviewer slammed back into the room. "That, that right there is what I mean! Use quotation marks. Did you learn how to write by reading plays!", the reviewer screamed. Writer: what do you mean... "Nope, try again," the reviewer chastised. "Do you mean like this?," the writer asked. The reviewer turned back to the writer. "Yes, is it really so hard?," he asked. "No, but I had a vision...," the writer responded. "Look, correct grammar usage is there for everyone's benefit." The reviewer sighed and leaned up against a table. "Without it, it just looked like an idiot wrote your story. Use it, for everyone's sake."

The story was interesting and not cliche. Also the main characters were unique but your chapters needed editing because their were a lot of mistakes. So far it's great.