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I LOVEE ITT! I WISH I CAME LATER! THEN I WOULDNT HAVE TO WAIT😭😭😭

Can’t wait for more chapters to be released and I hope that this book continues to be a great success good luck I really want to read more and see where the story goes

Writing Quality: First, there are many glitches and technicalities in grammar, especially in the tenses. But, it's understandable. My only concern is: be sensitive in the words you use. For example: 'Male' that should 'made.' However, I am sure that the Author overlooked this stuff. Second, I just like suggests to make the words and dialogues breathe. For example: Pain! She opened her eyes....... Not like: Pain! She opened her eyes.... To give more emphasis on' pain.' In the case of dialogues, I suggest that you put the person who quoted that, their expressions or such to make it livelier. Like these: "I'm sorry," (Name) exlamed. (Name) glares at the person in front of him and said:"You again?" Stability of Writing: I think you update more frequently hehehe. And not like: "She did that?" "She's so shameless!" "So despicable." Story Development: As of chapter 17, I really like where this story is going. But as early as it is, Its still early for me to comment on this phase. Character Design: Antogonist- her logic is out of this world. She also has a pit on her brain. FL- She's lovely and independent upon learning her mistakes from her previous life. Maybe it's just me, but I don't feel her loss for losing her child. It is just stated that she was angry and sorrowful but there's mention for her suffering for losing her child. ML- His nature is kind of inconsistent. Heartless first then proud later. Some chapters make me want to punch this guy. Also, his group of friends are really funny but sometimes I just want to bomb their mouths. World Background: I also have nothing much to say about this. Comments: 1. I noticed that the FL suffered from miscarriage but the very next day she went home? I'm quite confused about this because as far as I know, when a woman lost her child, she needs to atleast recuperate physically and mentally. The hospital will also not allowed her to do, especially when her guardian isn't present. 2. She's still in college and she's already pregnant? I know that she's married but wouldn't her grandpa and husband at least prevent her from attending her school? 3. Unborn baby. Okay, I know, I'm still inclined on this topic, but I really just want to comment on this. The unborn baby was mentioned for a few chapters, especially on taking revenge, but it's existence... Wasn't it taken too lightly? The FL says that she's going to avenge the baby, but I really don't feel it especially when she use her miscarriage as trap set for Yun Feng. Wasn't she suppose to atleast mourn for the loss for child rather than planning to pit the antogonist first? And the ML, He doesn't like the FL and want to divorce her but he thought back to hold the matters after finding the bottom of the truth. He's quite indecisive, I must say. Why didn't he first investigate before concluding and deciding to divorce her? I also thinks that the ML gives little care about the baby, I mean duh, your wife just miscarriage and for the very next day you send her a fucking divorce paper... Are you fucking nuts? Anyway, good job author-san for fleshing out a good novel! Thumbs up for that!

Love the story........❤❤❤❤❤❤..... Wow😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍love to read these stories as I am fan of novel loved it a lot... Thank you so much for such stories.....

Story is too good but lack of regular updates. It's interesting to read this plot.............................................................................

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