It's my novel and I think I'm gonna be doing good.
Very.
Great.
7 years ago
2
UnjustlyUnderpaid
It has a good first chapter. There are a few mistakes, but from what I read so far, I can see that this novel is an unrefined gem. It has an interesting plot and a some pretty decent character development. I’m not sure about the novel’s update stability nor about its world background, but I hope for the best.
7 years ago
1
SinB
Overall, has potential.
There are a few grammatical issues in the novel as well as writing in a way where it's more engaging. If this is your first time writing a novel like this, it's already pretty good. Just make sure to edit! Keep up the good work. :)
7 years ago
0
BerriApplepi
I've noticed some grammar and spelling errors but that can be fixed and I bet this story will become so good after fixing it. Base from the first chapter, it is actually quite good. (ignoring the grammar and spelling mistakes) I hope you improve more and wish you the best! I'll stock this in my library since I find the story interesting. Just work on the spelling and grammars 😊 I recommend you to dl grammarly to help you with the spelling and grammar 😀
It's my novel and I think I'm gonna be doing good. Very. Great.
It has a good first chapter. There are a few mistakes, but from what I read so far, I can see that this novel is an unrefined gem. It has an interesting plot and a some pretty decent character development. I’m not sure about the novel’s update stability nor about its world background, but I hope for the best.
Overall, has potential. There are a few grammatical issues in the novel as well as writing in a way where it's more engaging. If this is your first time writing a novel like this, it's already pretty good. Just make sure to edit! Keep up the good work. :)
I've noticed some grammar and spelling errors but that can be fixed and I bet this story will become so good after fixing it. Base from the first chapter, it is actually quite good. (ignoring the grammar and spelling mistakes) I hope you improve more and wish you the best! I'll stock this in my library since I find the story interesting. Just work on the spelling and grammars 😊 I recommend you to dl grammarly to help you with the spelling and grammar 😀