Ochieng, the son of the chief of Odindi clan in Karachuo division in Lu tribe leaves his home at a tender age to the forbidden land. There, he learns that he is an Ordainer, a class of powerful people born to save mankind. He also finds Apeleka, a beautiful woman whom he falls in love with. After leaving the land, he learns more about his role and powers as an Ordainer and does a lot to save people.
The novel is not bad considering the fact that he has not written any in the past. I the author's level of fantasy and I believe we'll be filled with more in the future.
The novel is just good. I don't see any flaw. The author to keep it up. Nothing much have been presented by the author but the he or she has gone I bet is commendable. I expect much in the future, I hope the author will not disappoint me.
I started reading the book the other day and so far so good, I can guarantee it's an interesting book. The legend Ochieng or somebody I see being brought up quite nicely and his experience in the forbidden land, if he survives I guess will be his trump card. He is the MC and because of the plot armor, I know the boy will survive. I can't say much coz the book itself has not gone far as far as chapters are concerned.
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Just started reading..nice world development... With traditions and history in detail. Expecting great writing in the future. go go go...🌍👍👍👍👍
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I love the way the author combined fantasy and traditions in Luo history. The story has lots of potential. Thankyou author for your creativity ;)
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Wow! What a good novel. I give it five stars! Talk about languages translation, story development, character design they are all in place. A novel that can be ready by all generation... I really enjoyed reading it. Looking forward for more chapters.
I Love the storyline, depiction of characters and the environment but the space between the previous chapter and the release of the Next is too far apart, I would have abandoned the book if not for the fact that I enjoy reading it
Loving this book. Found myself completely immersed but it hurts to pause for a long time waiting for updates. It would suffice if you update daily.
Very interesting I would like to see the end of this legendary,pls make the next chapter quickly I am full of anxiety,may the one from above bless your knowledge...........................
It's has one of the best storyline I have ever read... Although the name of the Characters were defficult to pronounce and this makes a little difficult to remember who is who in the story line, I trust you would use familiar English name next time. Thank you