The Mars Wars

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Author: Zedsdeadbaby
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In the far future, a young man named Trace is drafted into the marines. As he fights for his life, he discovers not only is he good at fighting, but he enjoys it. Will Trace survive and win the war? Or will he become yet another casualty, lying dead on the ground?



However, this story also contains a darker side... Trace has a secret so well kept, not even he knows about it...

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Derp_the_Donut
Derp_the_Donut

Once again thank you for writing this I know you haven't posted everything you have yet, so I look forward to seeing what you have planned for the rivalry between Trace and Zane, as well as the war against Mars. Note I just have to fill up this space so here I go. The only thing that I have to ship something to do with the same time as well and I will try and get a free to contact us at the end of the most high school and I will be a good time to time and money to pay for that.

6 years ago
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Geraldislife
Geraldislife

My boi xander is a damn good writer. He be a cool doodlebug. Y'all should vote for him cuz he deserves it. He work really hard on this and ya should support him. He should be really proud of this and it'd be cool if you voted for him. So yeet BOW TO THE DUCK GOD

6 years ago
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imhereforxander
imhereforxander

nice 😎👍 cool 😎👌💎💰💸 good 💯 lit 🔥 Cool but could use more character development and could be more formal. Could improve. Post more. Shauanahsuiwnoydzkgzljrauflfjzgzzbb🐮🐮🐯🐮🐒🐸🐯🐔🐮🐸🐒🙉🐒🦅

6 years ago
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MysticalSheep
MysticalSheep

This is an Amazing book! I loved the plot and I think this is a great start to your writing career. All in all, I love sci-fi thrillers so I loved your book, and I loved the theme which was present in it. If you spend a little more work, you can become really good at writing! Thanks, Mystical Sheep

6 years ago
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Zedsdeadbaby
Zedsdeadbaby

So it may seem like I have delusions of grandeur by rating myself like this, but in all honesty, I believe this rating is true! My story has been peer edited a ridiculous number of times, by basically everyone who was willing! After all that, I’m still getting feedback from people! Sure, not on Webnovel yet, but hopefully someday I’ll be getting feedback from here, too! Anyways, my point is this: My prologue needs a rework, but other than that, this story is my best work!

6 years ago
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niddaii2
niddaii2

Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!

4 years ago
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ringdomstoryken
ringdomstoryken

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

4 years ago
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Zero_2000X
Zero_2000X

A.

4 years ago
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ValgQueen
ValgQueen

YEETUS MY FEETUS AND FEETUS YOUR YEETUS GREAT STORY SON KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK (but post more child). Ooooh and apparently this review has to be more than 140 characters so...skelksleiejenwmwmkwkdndnsndnkskskskejekekekekdkdkdk****

6 years ago
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