A traveler that changes the world [IS BEING REWROTE!!!!]

I like it! The plot is interesting and making me want to read more. Keep up the good work. I will be waiting for more updates from you in the future. :)

Gave this a solid four because the author clearly has a good idea of where she wants the story to go, and though the writing could use editing, it's something that would surely improve with practice. For now, I would recommend for the author to use/install Grammarly, just to help smoothen the storytelling :) Spoiler alert: the MC is reborn into a magic society as a baby. It's definitely a fresher take, so if you're interested, give the story a try!

it was overall good, but i suggest you stick to one type of narration or to one perspective. But I can see the potential of your story although there are only 11 short chapters.

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The story line is really interesting and captivating. The only problem is inconsistency with updates... This can make readers uninterested after a while.

The story line is exceptional. I like the way the characters come alive in each chapter. Hoping their will be a connection to her past life sometime down the line. more updates will be fine too. Thank you writer.

It’s great so far, I’ve enjoyed seeing the details and intricacies that you’ve added, including stuff like baby voices. There are barely any grammatical errors and the updates are constant and stable thus far. The story is intriguing and I am actually looking forward to future updates. i still have some questions about the world the MC is living in but I’m guessing those will probably be answered in future chapters. Keep working hard and I’m sure you’ll do great. I do recommend whoever is reading this review to check the novel out and support the author. As for the author, the only Hong I want to say is good luck and have fun!

I like it a lot! It's surprisingly good! It felt fresh for my eyes to read a novel like this one here. I'd like to notify the author that there were some typos in some chaps but only minor ones! The plot is good and the author did a good job in describing the new world our characters are in. Overall, great job!! ❤ keep on updating!!