The 8th Apocalypse

The 8th Apocalypse

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Author: bluewinds84
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Hi all, sorry this is my first time writing a novel. Most of this are written in my down time and at 1st pass (ie. there may be typos or errors) so please be kind and let me know if you spot any technical mistakes. honestly it feels like a very draft work but I hope you guys don't mind it!

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AliandroTog
AliandroTog

Cool.

5 years ago
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Rairarku
Rairarku

The writing quality is good! A few bumps here and there, but it's the author's first novel, I forgive him. The update stabilty... eh.. it's been out for about five days, so I can't say much on that... Story dev. Nothing has happened yet (SHORT CHAPTERS! MY ARCH-NEMESIS!!!) but I have all the foreshadow I need right now, so I'm happy Character design.. Can I have a fifth grandparent? I want a fifth grandparent. I WANT A GRANDPA ARTHUR! He's such a nice old guy. And he has a decent life outside the game, and a reason to be in the game *cough* won't spoil it *cough*. The reason is pretty ******, there isn't to spoil about it. World background... The video game world has had no development yet (SHORT CHAPTERS!!) and I have no care for the real one (why I read webnovels.. *starts crying*) Now... About the chapter length.. the chapters are so short.. Well the first few were, anyways, the latter chapters are getting longer..

6 years ago
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