10 wishes

Not fleshed out massive amounts of typos and the mc is clearly not the sharpest tool in home depot... or menardes... or this planet... or any... 5 mins in and iv already crimged at the stupidity of it all

Looked good but all this anime stuff and the horrible grammar ruined it for me. It is only my oppinion. Looked good but all this anime stuff and the horrible grammar ruined it for me. It is only my oppinion.Looked good but all this anime stuff and the horrible grammar ruined it for me. It is only my oppinion.Looked good but all this anime stuff and the horrible grammar ruined it for me. It is only my oppinion.

Hello people of all genders Thank you for reading my novel The release rate for the story is well unknown. You are welcome to leave any kind of idea you have that you want to be in the story in the comments or you can just review the novel for me to see.

There is no proper background development in this novel. It's like walking a path without a road or destination. The author has talent for writing but still has much to learn. Hope he catches up soon.

Seems intresting , ill read as long as there is a good release date (at least 1-2 chap per week) ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

You need more detail, you know that you just say that she's the cutest. What I'm trying to say is how is she cute, does she have jade whit skin, dark black long hair or something like that

This is an interesting story. There are some grammatical errors but it didn't stop me from reading this. There's alaways a room for improvement. I'm looking forward to the chapters you're going to release. Thank you for sharing this.

This is a really Great story.please don't ever drop the story. Don't punish the rest because of a few adolescents throwing a fit. So keep up th great work.

Just want to rate I dont have anything to say 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌

Its a good story and cool mc and cool abilities. And 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

And this will be review no. 20 .......let's get that extra chapter, (even though I haven't started reading yet). . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Nice plot keep it up, and thanks for chapter, also don't make harem thing it makes story boring and don't make fast paced story make some plot for entertainment.

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Grammar makes the story extremely hard to read. Fairly over used idea (wishes), but not terrible. I honestly think this story would be loads better if the author just cared enough to edit, even on something as basic as Grammarly would remove the more heinous errors and would make the story at least readable.