I'm going to drop a sample chapter and from it you will see the differences I want in the development of the story. Also I'm dropping the idea of a harem until later in the novel. Someone pointed it out but I think that he will have a following of girls throughout the story who like him but he will be adamant on one girl but things happen with him and others and it turns into a harem. It's just an idea. I personally hate single romance novels but I kinda like my idea on a later romance turned harem lol. Anyways wait like 30 minutes and I will drop the first chapter for the reboot as something you guys can read and decide on.