i like cause i share the same view as him that mc gamer should build jack of all instead of full on merlin mage that's why i'm giving this a 5 star
7 years ago
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Webnovel_Usernames
Writing is terrible, but story idea isn't bad.
The author just needs to take his/her time writing it out.
The first chapter... starts out as a type of rant. Midway through the chapter, the rant ends, and the story begins.
If it wasn't for the rant, I would have enjoyed the chapter better.
i like cause i share the same view as him that mc gamer should build jack of all instead of full on merlin mage that's why i'm giving this a 5 star
Writing is terrible, but story idea isn't bad. The author just needs to take his/her time writing it out. The first chapter... starts out as a type of rant. Midway through the chapter, the rant ends, and the story begins. If it wasn't for the rant, I would have enjoyed the chapter better.