The Tale of Drogo Starblaze
Disclaimer: I do NOT own Naruto, Baruto and all its other characters, for they all belong to Masashi Kishimoto. All I own is Drogo and any other OC I create myself.
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A young soul died at the hands of his own loved one. Finally able to free himself from the shackle of pain and suffering but only to find his second life to be filled with the same pain as the first.
Do Gods exist? If so then why is his life so miserable? If not, then who shall he complain to? Why was he reincarnated and if his fate is to repeat the same sufferings then what's the point?
Alas, having a sister in this new world can change things maybe for the better or maybe for the worse. A hateful mother and a loving sister. Follow Drogo as be tries either tries to find the meaning of his life or plunge into the darkness that his heart has carried.
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Please Leave Reviews so i can get my story to have a Rating. It really helps.
This is also my first work so forgive me if it's not up to par with good fanfics and make contain grammatical errors
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I have to say, I have rarely read a fanfic where the writer knows the world as well as you do! Rich with detail and brimful of conflict, physical and emotional both. I think, though, that you get so caught up in the rush of writing that you miss punctuation here and there. As far as suggestions I can make, it's that you should read your chapters over once more before you post.
Such a great character build. The dtory was such a tear jerker for me. Craving for more chapters Such a great character build. The dtory was such a tear jerker for me. Craving for more chapters Such a great character build. The dtory was such a tear jerker for me. Craving for more chapters Such a great character build. The dtory was such a tear jerker for me. Craving for more chapters Such a great character build. The dtory was such a tear jerker for me. Craving for more chapters
This is an absolute masterpiece! Wonderful in both the story and writing aspect. Only the updates seem to be a little dragged out for my taste. Other than that, keep it up!
Did I mention I love Naruto!!!!! I really like the story so far !!!! EEEEEEEEp can't wait for more, I hope you keep it up and make the story even more interesting.
nice work dude.... keep up the good work... hope for more chapters to come... if it could be permitted to have manga and anime it would definitely be a huge hit...
This is a great idea and hope it continues to the end, it doesn't get nearly as much recognition as it show. Really looking forward to the future plot and personally would like it to continue having the darker theme and not getting reformed and forgiving everyone.
seems interesting so ill try it for a bit after it has more chapters......... so anyway keep it up........ good luck........ sdfafas sdfa sfasd fasdfasasgf asf asasdf asdfga sd asg sd
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This is amazing I can't wait for more to come please don't drop this for it's a good story and set up tho there some things that can be changed but it still leads to a good development in the story
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Good story with a richly developed MC. Original take on a Naruto FanFiction. Tragic past and present of the MC makes the MC need for revenge more real and relatable. Hope for new chapters soon.