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when Ajax crossed over to another world , he learnt that human can't cultivate which made them the weakest race, he has a system which will help him to make the humans strong
M_T : I am a newbie author, and English isn't my first language. this novel is just to build my writing style .
The story plot is good and characters design as well but but the way you write the convo and the person who converse made me confused maybe because its different form from what i have usually read. But this is only my opinion and so far its quite interesting. More power to you and write more😊
Hi Author i read your novel it is good and interesting but I feel there are little errors and not that clear. I think you need to edit your work except that everything is fine. I liked your novel.my best wishes to you.😃