continue writing and dont get discourage...
fighting!!! would be better to upload more chapters... 😊😊
5 chapters cant give enough results... usually ul need more. before i got 32chapters with just low votes and ranked below 1000. just be patient dear and do what will make u happy. 😉
6 years ago
2
lazyredragon
The FL is a strong bad ass I love her hopefully week get some history in later chapters like how she was before the whole incident.
Jumps straight into the action I like that overall grammar is nice a few errors here and there but not enough to draw you away from the story
8/10 an AWESOME read.
6 years ago
1
MishalZamir
That's actually quite interesting! More chapters would be nice though ;)
some typos; minor things. needs enhancement- I like ur character design and story development
Keep writing- Meshal! ^^ x
continue writing and dont get discourage... fighting!!! would be better to upload more chapters... 😊😊 5 chapters cant give enough results... usually ul need more. before i got 32chapters with just low votes and ranked below 1000. just be patient dear and do what will make u happy. 😉
The FL is a strong bad ass I love her hopefully week get some history in later chapters like how she was before the whole incident. Jumps straight into the action I like that overall grammar is nice a few errors here and there but not enough to draw you away from the story 8/10 an AWESOME read.
That's actually quite interesting! More chapters would be nice though ;) some typos; minor things. needs enhancement- I like ur character design and story development Keep writing- Meshal! ^^ x