The Military System(DROPPED)

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This Novel is Good Shiittt has a lot of potential.. Im just hoping for more chapters. MORE CHAPTER RELEASE PLSS. MORE CHAPTER RELEASE PLSS. MORE CHAPTER RELEASE PLSS.MORE CHAPTER RELEASE PLSS.MORE CHAPTER RELEASE PLSS.MORE CHAPTER RELEASE PLSS.MORE CHAPTER RELEASE PLSS.MORE CHAPTER RELEASE PLSS.MORE CHAPTER RELEASE PLSS.

I just finished binging this and I have a couple things to say. First of all: this is an amazing book and I really like what you’ve written so far. Secondly: the world is interesting, based on the history you gave it. The ****y tiny downside is the lack of originality in the names of the continent and the existing races, although admittedly, being original with races is quite hard nowadays since J.R.R. Tolkien. Thirdly: I recommend you to make your sentences a bit more interesting. You repeat his name a lot; Add did this, Add did that. It kinda reminds me of my first Latin text: Iupiter deus est. Iupiter pater est. Iupiter sedet in templo. It’s a bit ******, isn’t it. Especially the repeating names. Fourthly: You could also use shorter and longer sentences a bit better, because sometimes I read a piece of like fourty lines in which there were only three to four sentences. Fifthly: What i found a bit confusing, is how you kept saying ‘his level 5 strength was more than enough to deal with these vermin.’ But a few lines down we read that his strength was at 10. Perhaps you could alter it to ‘his 10 strength was more than enough to deal with these vermin.’ Sixthly and lastly: I quite like the information and history you give on his system-bought weapons. Keep it up!

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Según yo todo se va a la mierda en el capítulo 17 y en los 15 ya se notan los cambios de mierda en el sistem o sistema como le digan en tu pais

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This is very promising. The only problem I see is that it may have been dropped from being written. The story needs time to understand. Some aspects won’t make sense at first but it is explained later. I wouldn’t recommend reading on this site though. LightNovel.org has double the chapters but even that sit is a bit outdated for this novel.

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Good story and i want MORE chapters!!!

First... the Mc is cold hearted and merciless soldier, he will do anything to achieve his goal, the system who assisting our Mc is OP yet Cheapskate at same time.... the dialogue between MC and System is getting better each chapter it became exchanging banter sometimes..... its still early but i rated it 4/5 the minus is lack of update a little spoiler.... at chaps 33 you will see another interesting side of our cold hearted MC c'mon guys it worth the shot

I really like this novel, hope the story continues! I got thru this novel in one night so the only thing missing is MORE CHAPTERS ;) Thanks for a good read dear Author!

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