What defines a person? Is it their soul, body, or memories? Is it the choices they make along their journey in life? Or does fate decide?
"Only one thing was certain, her name was Jiang Xiulan.
Or, was it?
Maybe it was Liu Lan?"
"For Liu Lan, who provided her with a body, she would avenge her death. For Jiang Xiulan, who provided her with a soul, she would regain her lost memories. For herself, who was both women and neither, she would live as Jiang Lan and cultivate to gain the strength necessary to fulfill her goals."
As she collects the pieces of her past, will she decide to leave her past behind or embark on a bloody road of no return? The path to ascension is long and the wheel of fate continues to turn with the reaping and sowing of karma.
It's a great story. I haven't read any stories about people leveling up their abilities so this was interesting. I also liked how she combined both her identities and the fact that she's just a normal looking girl like everyone else makes her more relatable. Good work and keep it up! There were times when certain sentences didn't make sense but with more work, you could make this an even better story.
I have to say I love the description used for everything! It really brings a good flavor to the story. The character design and the details are great and I love how the plot is going til now. My only note is that long paragraphs sometimes make the reader lose their focus, but other than that, I love this!!!!
Decided to change my review upon further consideration. The reincarnation theme is interesting as I foresee much development on it. Looking forward to it. Author follows the mold of a cultivation novel well, infusion of personality comes through in the work. All the best!
The few chapter i read were quality work, the pacing was good and i didn't notice any grammatical mistake. The story's plot is advancing and i noticed some little foreshadowing.. Put you in my library, keep up the good work!
The story is generally interesting and mistakes are not glaringly annoying where met. I'd recommend this to anyone interested in the genre, not because it's incredible, but because it has great potential.
Beautiful beginning! Loved your language and style. I like the way the story is developing. Please keep updating it regularly! I have added it to my library:)
The chapters which I have read so far are good. The writing is proficient and the plot seems to get interesting with each passing chapter. Character development is also nice, quickly grasps the readers attention. Keep up the good work!
The writing quality is without doubt very good. Very smooth to read. The plot and the setting is very interesting and promising. Makes me anticipate the quick MC growth. Keep up the great work!
Interesting. I read this 6 chaps and I will probably read this from time to time. I hate waiting for chapters. I think it's good so far. I am not the best person to rate the writing quality but I didn't see any errors and so on. Good luck!
Carrying the soul of Jiang Xiulan, a apex cultivator who died due to her Dao Companion's betrayal during her tribulation and the body of Liu Lan, a bottom-feed cultivator who found a treasure and died because a stronger person coveted it, Jiang Lan is reborn! Any guesses how this new girl dies? The sect is named Cursed Ghost Sect, so I expect horror elements later on. Plus, chance of having a revival based cheat! Can't really comment much due to only 5 short chapters being released, but the story seems promising.
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As the author, I'm gonna shamelessly give myself my first review. Since I'm just creating the story as I go, I don't even know what's going to happen next haha. The story starts of a bit slow and in a pretty standard xianxia format, but I hope it's still enough to keep readers interested. Excited to see where my story will be heading next! I welcome any kind of critiques, comments, and questions!