Late for the kill - Early for the slaughter
On their Day of Becoming, Vaan and Blaine's mother revealed a hidden cellar that had somehow gone undiscovered by them and their adventurous spirits. After a reasonable amount of questions, they all descend into the darkness and find themselves in Eden, a strange, war-torn land of mystery and the unknown. They quickly discover they are no ordinary men, but Kings by birth-right, sent to Earth for training and protection from one of the Old Gods of ruin, Cinhdyr.
In hopes to transcend into gods themselves and stop Cinhdyr's vicious reign, they set out to find the five eyes of Eden. Crossing scorching deserts ablaze, and stormy, turbulent seas, acquiring abilities and power beyond their wildest dreams along the way. A multitude of deranged creatures and massive beasts rise against them, and the enticing tumult of the mysterious Umbra steadily pursues for their souls.
At the brink of an apocalypse, the fate of two worlds rest on their shoulders, but with the help of some old friends, willpower, and forged steel, they set to reclaim their rightful throne and heal the scars of ruin. All while learning the truth and piece together their dark and shrouded heritage.
This is their tale. A tale of two bastard sons. A tale of mystery, betrayal, vengeance, and glory.
"They say there's no love greater than the love of a brother, but all souls can be driven into darkness."
Trevor, I have to say I've quite enjoyed the book so far. Still very vague as far as the overall plot, but that's expected as it is a work in progress. I absolutley cant wait to read more and hope Chapter 3 reconnects with the brothers! Best of luck!
I agree with AUTHORized. You have some real potential here. Love the past segments, added a ton of depth. It was a little off putting starting with the twins the completely shifting gears, but I have to say Chapter 2 has got me wanting more for sure.
Hey, Trev, its your uncle randy. You know I don't read much but so far its pretty awesome. Talented little fella. Your aunt says its really good.
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