What if you hear about a place where men could reach immortality? What if you're a man with nothing to lose? Only one last chance at getting your life back? Surgit, desperate to find a cure for his mortal disease, sets sail towards the fabled city of Yharnam. The city of healing and miracles. The city of Legends...
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This story is a fan fiction inspired by the world of Bloodborne, a game made exclusively for the PS4 by fromsoftware.
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For Bloodborne fans: the story will expand upon the lore of the game bit by bit. Most other characters and elements are from my imagination.
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Release schedule: 1 chapter per day except on weekends. Depending on my work schedule I might release two to three chapters a day.
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Great story, there is enough intrigue here to keep me going. The fights are brutal and so far, I`m looking forward to seeing where the characters will end up. Keep it up.
Great story with excellent character background. I like the mystery created by the author. I always liked the game and I'm excited to see how its lore will unfold here. Keep the great work author san.
A very interesting novel, with a world surrounded in mystery and characters with different personalities. I would definitely recommend reading the novel to others, it is quite similar to the lord of the mysteries in the genre but with more violence.
Loving the characters, love the story build so far The fights are amazing as well even though you started this novel you are ranking up as one of my favorites
Love how the story is progressing. The charachter has to learn from his mistakes. It's a nice change from having him go through the basic learning through a master thing. i hope you don't give up the story, I like how it represents the game pretty well so far.
For the legion! What else thats about it hope for the dead to find you hmmm not enough words to move around for the legion! For the legion for the legion!
And now I feel an overwhelming need to play some bloodbourne. Dang video games distracting me from my books. I very much approve this book, even if I do have to read it chapter by chapter.
Wow not bad I so recommend this story to all come one and all to READ this novel this is a good read😜 fun, exciting, scary HORROR!! 😖😖😖😝
I love this more than I can express, Bloodborne is my favourite game of all time, with the best setting, characters and lore. You are a great writer and I hope this novel will continue untill it achieves a satisfying ending. (I hate when stories are dropped without warning, which is more common than I'd like when it comes to videogame web fiction) Sorry for not going into more detail, but I am pretty bad at writing reviews and I don't want to embarass myself ;) Cheers to you, good hunter and may the good blood guide your way!
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Bro. I look at the reviews and they say for the Legion for the undead Legion. 😂😂😂 what? I guess I should research what Bloodborne is about. Lmfaoo.
Not actually read a single chapter but errr... For The Undead Legion i guess. Why u gotta do this 140 rubbish Webnovel it's so mean, i have to write random rubbish like this to fill it in.
Great story, backgriund and lore u will love it. Supper immersive and 0 grammatical errors... Oh sweet blood, it bekons to me. It makes a man sick!! Epic stuff.
I am not good at summing up, but before saying my personal opinion, I will direct my score point by point. About the writing, it's good, you could almost say that it looks like a writing from a professional and, I can say it's improving a little every day. Although I'm not very experienced to analyze this kind of thing. Upgrade? You could say it's almost a daily update. Except for some improper events (like any person), but it is kept up to date. To the point that it is an almost insane rhythm. Characters? Bearing in mind that it is based on the game of bloodborne and, it has 3 fixed characters developing (the others of the beginning do not count them, but they had their part). They are not at all flat characters or devoid of carizma. In others it could directly describe that a character is "charismatic" and then in the development does not show it at all. here? It will not give Spoilers. But they are continually developing, the characters have their personal "evolution" in several aspects and, it goes deeper into them chapter by chapter. He has no illogical moments to his "character", they have that "spark", which one would say could say that he "feels" like real people and not just a "character". Really satisfactory. World Background? Well, it's bloodborn XD. I do not know how to say it, but it keeps well the original, thetrical, helpless, desquisiante, bloody, intriguing and with a hint of madness. For other aspects, everything is simply excellently detailed, including "zones" that are not found in the original game. There were only 2 parts that were somewhat confusing, but only that from chapter 1 to chapter 177. It is not something that one would have to fix a lot. ---- I already said that I was not good at summarizing ... Personal opinion. It is a good story, it contains moments of action, reflections, recapitulation of past events, necessary transit chapters and, at the right time, some literary resources are used to make the matter as fluent as possible. It takes a while to get to the part where the author can take greater liberties to develop more than what the "game" is. He also put his own adaptation of the original mechanics and, I can say that it is a nice result. Taking into account that it is based on a "world" already created, I would say that it is an excellent job. Also, how the original game is very "ambiguous" in many ways. The author takes liberties based on his own theories, "filling" possible gaps in which he can work. But without losing the ecence of history.