God's Path

Well, I do not know if you'll feel offended of my review or not or if you'll take my opinion into concederation or not but I want to give some point toward your story. First of all, I can say that the idea of the story is quiet nice, the only thing that I disliked about it is making the enemy of the MC is the god. Look I am not question your decision but I believe that it was to be best if you made his enemy quiet logical and reasonable not some overpowered being that the MC can never dream of beat up, I do not Know maybe some servant to the shinigami that ended taking the MC soul before his time. In the place of apologizing or something he destroyed the MC book of fate to stop him from reincarnated, all of that to protect himself from the wrath of the shinigami. Because of this in the place of reincarnated or going to heaven, the MC end up in hell were being tortured for something that he did not do. With some kind of luck he was able to escape taking with him aizen legacy. Do you see? I am not telling you what to do but you must give a proper reason to the MC transformation from someone normal to someone obsessed of becoming a God. From what I see, you made the MC a copy of aizen sosuke with God complex. He should learn from aizen mistakes. Aizen was intelligent, talented but in the end he failed, because he did not have any friends, any people to support him or guide him and show him the right bath when he become lost. You need to build his character. Kyoga suigetsu can help in that by making him realize the importance of friendship and all of that especially as the MC thinking reassemble aizen's. Well, maybe I am saying all of this because I hate evil character and enjoy reading about heroes and all of that but I hope that take my opinion into consideration. And good luck.

Release more chapters dont drop it And stay on op mc Sometimes i read op mc then suddenly nerf op mc kinda frustrating really hate it Release more chapters dont drop it And stay on op mc Sometimes i read op mc then suddenly nerf op mc kinda frustrating really hate it

I love the story so far! It may be too early to write a review, but I want to share my critique. First of all, I think that his end goal should be more realistic, overthrowing a god is an overkill in my opinion, but that could be interesting to read, I want to see how this Mc vs God will develop in the future. Secondly, I couldn't find any serious problems with grammar, but that could be because I'm not a native English speaker. So congratulations! Thirdly, the story is satisfying to read, especially how he handles his opponents. I also love how he dealt with the situation in the third chapter, that gave me an impression that he's not just a brute that handles every problem by using strength but also with his intelligence. I will leave some of my ideas for the story below. Maybe he could become friends with Minato? By saying that Hokage is in his fourties, I assume that Minato should be attending the academy now, right? Maybe he could have a romance with Kushina? That'd be so sweet. Perhaps she could melt 'the glacier' :D I think that Aizen could be a little less evil and show more emotions, that'd be cool in my opinion. You don't have to stick to the canon too much, from my perspective this ruins a lot of stories because they become repetitive very quickly. I would love to see how his decisions shape the world and affect the development of canon characters. Maybe he could one day become the Hokage or rebuild the Espada in this world and fight the Akatsuki or other villages? Later in the story when he will reach the peak of power, he could evolve with his hogyoku and make a dimensional tear that will allow him to travel to different worlds with stronger enemies to continue the story. I'm rooting for this novel, please don't drop this or I will be really sad.

One of the best novels that I have read! The world has had enough of those foolish and good hearted Main Characters. It's time for a smart realist to take up the spotlight.

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Even though there are some little things that could have been done better I still think that as long as you keep writing what you like you will be making a great story.

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Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎

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